Duet (France, Germany)

[ellamequiere]

Title: Duet
Warnings: Dark sex
Summary: “I thought,” whispered Germany, anger and heat making his voice hoarse. “that you didn't fuck on the floor.”
Characters: France, Germany, Italy in absentia
Year: 1925
Related fics: Sex Talk (prequel),  Duet, Epilogue (sequel)

Comments

[nakedfiction]

I may or may not have just commented on this on the kink meme, as I couldn't contain my joy, but I just thought that I would be the first to tell you here that this is one of THE most amazing fills that I've ever read.

I hope that you continue to write many many many stories so that I may enjoy them and shower you with praise, which you so deserve!

<3

[ellamequiere]

You are officially the first non!anon to ever comment on something I wrote. Thank you so much! And thank you for sticking with me through all the introspection and slow updates.

Oh! And I forgot--

[ellamequiere]

--that I wanted to tell you how totally fabulous I think your icon is! BFT love. (Did you ever read that fill where they all do fem!Austria? So IC!)

Re: Oh! And I forgot--

[nakedfiction]

I didn't read that! :O *Runs off to find it*

I didn't make the icon, but it is rather fabulous! The BFT is really my very favorite in Hetalia. I read anything about them, no matter what.

(But I do have a soft-spot in my heart for France, above all.)

[mogumogu]

Okay, I'm gonna de-anon my comment (to further de-anon, I'm the person who nitpicked on things like Italy's sexual experience and stamina):

Did Germany really go back to Italy, or did he leave in shame? I must know! O_O

Ah, your story. It was really captivating and sexy (and a little spooky. Something sick and disturbing is going on between our two teachers), and I loved how it was hard core, but it didn't go through the usual rounds smut goes through.

[ellamequiere]

Hi! Thanks so much for the deanon!

I really appreciated your nitpickitude. I edited part one some with that in mind... if you felt inspired, you could tell me what you thought <3 (I still let him hang on for a while for, you know, smut purposes, but I changed some of the other stuff around).

Btw, would you ever maybe possibly think about beta'ing for me? I know everybody's IRL is super busy and hectic and stuff, but I thought I'd ask <3.

[mogumogu]

Well, part of me kind of wants and needs Italy to be cuddled or to wake up next to someone (he does like having company in bed--it's canon!) and say how he felt about it to, But the other part of me knows that the person he has eyes for is covered in hickies, bites and scratches and has just been dominated and shamed, and might not be able to face someone who, while not anymore untouched, has just innocently learned a little bit about what makes him tick. On the other hand, if he leaves, what will France tell him... or do to him in the morning? He can't leave him defenseless like that (that's how he got in this mess in the first place)! What a dilemma...

There's culturally a huge focus on penetrative sex due to centuries of enforced lack of creativity and fun, I suppose, so it's hard to escape the regular smut rounds, even after supposedly breaking away from that, I guess.

Hmmm, I've never been a fanfic Beta before... this could be interesting.

Love the icon <3

[ellamequiere]

Germany doesn't really think that France would treat Italy badly-- he knows them both too well for that. What eventually is going to keep him from staying is partly the fact that he doesn't want to face France, and partly the fact that after the night he's just had, he's now thoroughly convinced that he'll never be able to make love, instead of just fucking (cue German GUILT)

As a lady in long-term relations with (two other) ladies, I have an IMMENSE chip on my shoulder about the societal focus on penetrative sex (lesbian sex isn't "real" sex). So I try to avoid that when I can.

Sent PM-- thanks again for the comments!

[karoia]

I just had to deanon and come and write how much I loved this, as well. It was so awesome. When I was reading the first parts, I couldn't stop thinking about it while waiting for an update! This was written so well, and just so different than everything else you usually see in fics. I liked how it wasn't the usual smut, but was still a bit smutty <3 And I loved how you portrayed everyone... it was so different than how they are usually written and I loved it. Even though I'm usually a Germany/Italy only fan, I am so glad I checked this fic out because it was amazing and so well written and I can't even explain all the love I feel for this! It was just so perfect

Aaahhhh I've been rambling, but I just had to comment!!!

[ellamequiere]

Thank you so much for the deanon! I'm glad you liked it <3.

[mykonos2]

This was awesome. I normally don't read angsty or dark fics, but I couldn't resist this one. I love Germany x France too much *___*

so sad to see that 'it ends' for the two of them here *sigh*

I'm still adding the story to my rec list if you don't mind <3

[ellamequiere]

I'm super flattered! Go ahead.

...and don't worry, I'm sure they go on to have much angsty, kinky sex in the future. They haven't even fought WWII yet o_o

[kayoshybrid]

I just finished reading 'Sex Talk', and intense curiosity took over to read on -- and I'm bloody glad I did

[ellamequiere]

Ok, and now a reply for real