Duet (France, Germany)

[ellamequiere]

Title: Duet
Warnings: Dark sex
Summary: “I thought,” whispered Germany, anger and heat making his voice hoarse. “that you didn't fuck on the floor.”
Characters: France, Germany, Italy in absentia
Year: 1925
Related fics: Sex Talk (prequel),  Duet, Epilogue (sequel)

Comments

[mogumogu]

Okay, I'm gonna de-anon my comment (to further de-anon, I'm the person who nitpicked on things like Italy's sexual experience and stamina):

Did Germany really go back to Italy, or did he leave in shame? I must know! O_O

Ah, your story. It was really captivating and sexy (and a little spooky. Something sick and disturbing is going on between our two teachers), and I loved how it was hard core, but it didn't go through the usual rounds smut goes through.

[ellamequiere]

Hi! Thanks so much for the deanon!

I really appreciated your nitpickitude. I edited part one some with that in mind... if you felt inspired, you could tell me what you thought <3 (I still let him hang on for a while for, you know, smut purposes, but I changed some of the other stuff around).

Btw, would you ever maybe possibly think about beta'ing for me? I know everybody's IRL is super busy and hectic and stuff, but I thought I'd ask <3.

[mogumogu]

Well, part of me kind of wants and needs Italy to be cuddled or to wake up next to someone (he does like having company in bed--it's canon!) and say how he felt about it to, But the other part of me knows that the person he has eyes for is covered in hickies, bites and scratches and has just been dominated and shamed, and might not be able to face someone who, while not anymore untouched, has just innocently learned a little bit about what makes him tick. On the other hand, if he leaves, what will France tell him... or do to him in the morning? He can't leave him defenseless like that (that's how he got in this mess in the first place)! What a dilemma...

There's culturally a huge focus on penetrative sex due to centuries of enforced lack of creativity and fun, I suppose, so it's hard to escape the regular smut rounds, even after supposedly breaking away from that, I guess.

Hmmm, I've never been a fanfic Beta before... this could be interesting.

Love the icon <3

[ellamequiere]

Germany doesn't really think that France would treat Italy badly-- he knows them both too well for that. What eventually is going to keep him from staying is partly the fact that he doesn't want to face France, and partly the fact that after the night he's just had, he's now thoroughly convinced that he'll never be able to make love, instead of just fucking (cue German GUILT)

As a lady in long-term relations with (two other) ladies, I have an IMMENSE chip on my shoulder about the societal focus on penetrative sex (lesbian sex isn't "real" sex). So I try to avoid that when I can.

Sent PM-- thanks again for the comments!

Re: Love the icon <3

[mogumogu]

France is one suspicious guy sometimes...

Poor fellow... Just how many infamous traditions of guilt are there? And what about tonight was different, other than Italy?

[ellamequiere]

Update: I cannot figure out how to send pm's. That'll teach me to say I've done something when I actually mean that I'm going to do it. So, if you're interested in helping me out, send ME a pm, ok?

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[ellamequiere]

Whoops, didn't mean to post that yet. Also wanted to say:

1) Germany did go back to Italy... I think. But I won't know for sure unless I write it, which since I'm curious now I possibly will do?

2) Something intense is definitely going on with them. Not too long later there will be Vichy (although I personally like the Nazi Party As Alternate Identity fannon), and then partitioning... so for the poor dears, it only goes down from here.

3) I totally hate the smut rounds. You know, first base, second base, third base, anal. I hate when gay sex is written like straight sex but with butts, and I'm glad it worked for you!

4) Thank you! Hope I haven't totally dorkified myself by responding twice.