Comments | elisi: Miss M's 'A Breath Of Eternity' Chapter 1.

elisi

Miss M's 'A Breath Of Eternity' Chapter 1.

Jul 06, 2010 20:33

As Buffy used to say, 'Must be Tuesday' - my little girl's not feeling great. (She stubbed her toe and one of her best friends is going to a different Secondary School and she's already upset...) So, since she's been a busy little bee, I said that we could post this. Beta-read by yours truly, but trust me, it's all her own writing. (Hanging over my ( Read more... )

miss m

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zanthinegirl July 7 2010, 07:44:09 UTC

Now, rule one - DO NOT TOUCH IT. It is no fun to live forever, just ask Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged.

Or Jack!

Really an entertaining start. Looking forward to seeing where you take it!

Jack elisi July 7 2010, 16:11:05 UTC

I did wonder about Jack, but then I thought no for a reason that shall be revealed if you are patient!

Miss M

Re: Jack zanthinegirl July 7 2010, 17:31:53 UTC

I can wait! Especially for Jack, assuming that's where you're going.

And I love that icon. It's Mr Smith from the Sarah Jane Adventures, right?

Re: Jack elisi July 7 2010, 18:30:59 UTC

No to Jack!

Yes to the icon!

Miss M

bewarethespork July 8 2010, 01:55:29 UTC

This is brilliant. I look forward to reading more from Miss M!

elisi July 8 2010, 06:40:51 UTC

LOOK WHAT A VERY KIND FRIEND MADE FOR ME! I HAVE MY OWN SIGNATURE ICON!!!!!

Thank you very much for reading my work! :)

Miss M

Now with ecstatic mood mode.

bewarethespork July 8 2010, 06:43:01 UTC

That is a lovely icon! :D I shall now forever imagine Miss M as little Amelia. :D

elisi July 8 2010, 19:52:23 UTC

I look nothing like Amelia... though I am touched that you could ever compare me to her!

NOT Miss M

(Well, it is me, but I'm not going to write Miss M anymore, because my icon says it all! )

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the_royal_anna July 12 2010, 20:25:52 UTC

I am very slow getting here, but am so pleased I did! This made me smile from ear to ear. The Doctor is so brilliantly described, and this is about as Doctor-ish as a line can possibly be: "Looks just like air, except orange and it makes you immortal."

I am intrigued to find out more about their date with adventure and whether the Tolkeen legend does indeed turn out to be true!

elisi July 13 2010, 15:42:16 UTC

Looks like a comment, exept ultramarine blue, and it makes you smile for weeks!

I am glad you enjoyed it and late is better than never!

the_royal_anna July 16 2010, 06:37:50 UTC

Looks like a comment, except ultramarine blue, and it makes you smile for weeks!

Hee! It certainly does. :)