Miss M's 'A Breath Of Eternity' Chapter 1.

[elisi]

As Buffy used to say, 'Must be Tuesday' - my little girl's not feeling great. (She stubbed her toe and one of her best friends is going to a different Secondary School and she's already upset...) So, since she's been a busy little bee, I said that we could post this. Beta-read by yours truly, but trust me, it's all her own writing. (Hanging over my

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[alt_universe_me]

Oh, my gosh. I am laughing so hard at the Doctor saying zippity doo dah :) That is exactly what he would do. Your little girl is a genius!

[elisi]

*beams with motherly pride*

I'm especially impressed that she's managed to capture his voice so well, it's rather tricky. :)

[missus_grace]

That's awesome work right there! Looks like she takes after her mom :)

[elisi]

Aw, thank you! :) And I'm not sure whether it's inheritance, or just the fact that she's been devouring books since she was 5...

[kathyh]

I can't write this well now, let alone when I was her age.

Love "Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged." and "Three - Obey the first two", both exactly what the Doctor would say.

[elisi]

I can cope with tomorrow-definitely!!!!
Thank you ever so much for agreeing to make me a incon ,oh, ican barely hit the righht letters on the keyboard now!

MISS M <---Oops!

[kathyh]

It will be my pleasure and I'll send it to your mum when it's ready.

I often can't hit the right letters on the keyboard either!

[elisi]

Thank you! I don't usually write icnon, I was just in an overexcited state!

Miss M

[gillo]

It is no fun to live forever, just ask Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged.

This is an astoundingly well-educated Doctor - and writer!

There was once a race called the Tolkeen. They were pompous, and looked down upon the Time Lords and Daleks

Just wonderful!

“A date with adventure!”

Oh yes please! Looking forward to more of this.

Hope the poorly toe is better soon.

[elisi]

The Doctor(ten) said that he'd met Arthur Dent in the Christmas invasion. I think many people would think the same as the Tolkeen! (None of the live journalists, of course....)
MissM

[luckweaver]

Good evening/morning/afternoon, Miss M.

Wowbagger the Infinitely Prolonged.
--- oh, this was too good. Made me giggle, so much.

He gloried in the fact that Amelia didn’t complain when he showed off and juggled stuff around. In fact, she loved it.
--- I'm with Amelia. I love his tawdry quirks!! Plus I've been behaving like that for years ¬_¬

“A date with adventure!”
--- Dream come true, if you ask me.

A brilliant piece, as ever. I like the installment idea, keeps us all hanging on your every word ;) As always, your writing is a pleasure to wake up to. And I'm glad to see someone is finally writing a proper little!Amelia adventure story!
- Redjay x

[elisi]

This is no ordinary adventure, I'm telling you. You will CRY in the last chapter! I am terrible for habits-you couldn't really call them quirks. My Mum is making us pizza! BBQ Chicken, sweetcorn and red peppers. MMMMMMMMMM!

Thank you!
Miss M

PS-In one episode Ten says: "Yeah! Not bad for a man in his jim-jams! Very Arthur Dent. Now, there was a nice man."

[luckweaver]

Ooh, that pizza sounds divine. I love peppers. Had chicken for dinner, too. ;D

And I love fics that cry. I mean, I hate crying, but I respect something that can make me cry... You know what I mean? Emotions = win. And... Well, I spin, I have crazy hand gestures, I flex my jaw, I ramble, I generally twitch... I physically cannot sit still, or make a point with anything bordering decorum. No finishing school would even let me through the gates.

*eagerly awaiting chapter 2* If I don't reply immediately, I'm away for a few days. Might see rays, if I scuba dive at the right time! *fingers crossed*

- Redjay x
ps: BRILLIANT AVATAR

[elisi]

I just finished the story. Pass me the tissues! Oh, it was SO HARD finishing it. It was so sad. You'll see when I post it.

Miss M
Now with all new upset mode.