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elise_509

Best Laid Plans

Jul 19, 2009 23:19

Title: Best Laid Plans
Pairing: Jack/Sawyer
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Pilot - Part One
Disclaimer: Not mine!
lostsquee luau: For inthekeyofd, who requested Jack/Sawyer with white.
Summary: What if Sawyer had decided to like Jack right off the bat and viewed Kate as the rival?

( The good doctor was wearin' white, and it didn't get more fittin' than that. )

luau 2009, jack/sawyer

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elise_509 July 20 2009, 20:40:56 UTC

Hmmm, I wasn't planning on writing more in this universe, but maybe if the luau leads me there, I will re-visit this version of Sawyer. ;) I'm glad you liked him!

alliecat8 July 20 2009, 05:30:36 UTC

He's worked bigger challenges in shorter amounts of time before.

Good ol' season 1 Sawyer. I miss him.

The last line kills me.

Loved it! :D

elise_509 July 20 2009, 20:41:40 UTC

I miss S1 Sawyer too. I think 90% of my luau fic so far has been re-visiting S1. I miss it so.

Thanks for reading and commenting, darlin'! I'm glad you liked this. :)

halfdutch July 20 2009, 05:40:02 UTC

Mmmmm, I love predatory Sawyer so much, esp. when he knows just what he wants and plots how to get it. And awww, S1 love. ♥

elise_509 July 20 2009, 20:42:26 UTC

Predatory Sawyer is a lot of fun, especially when aimed at Jack. It's fun to revisit those S1 moments when Sawyer was always circling around Jack, trying to get under his skin. :)

haldoor July 20 2009, 07:20:39 UTC

AWESOME! Ha, can just see Sawyer planning things out like this, and then that last line! Perfectly S1 Sawyer, indeed!

elise_509 July 20 2009, 20:42:56 UTC

Thanks so much! I love S1 Sawyer, he's so much fun to work with. :)

kellysparrow July 20 2009, 10:22:18 UTC

This made me smile like a lunatic. Oh, don't we all miss that Sawyer? And that last line: classic and sooo like Sawyer. I liked this a lot! :D

elise_509 July 20 2009, 20:43:35 UTC

Hee, I'm glad it brought out the lunacy smile! A writer can't ask for more. :) I'm really happy that you liked this bunches. *MUAH*

kellysparrow July 21 2009, 12:09:41 UTC

Truefax! :D

That goodbye scene in the S1 finale... Still gives me the chills. You don't need a lot of fantasy to know that they SOOO shagged each other when the cameras weren't looking ;)