Heart vs. Mind

[elise_509]

Title: Heart vs. Mind
Pairing: Jack/Boone
Rating: R
Spoilers: 1.05 “White Rabbit”
Disclaimer: Not mine.
lostsquee luau: I usually don't like to combine queenly requests, but this one fell into place as combining perfectly, I couldn't help it. I hope you darlings don't mind.

For haldoor, who requested PWP, with one of the favored pairings being Jack/Boone,

Comments

[haldoor]

I can really see Boone feeling like this after everything Jack did so effortlessly, when Boone seemed to fail at every turn, despite his best attempts! I can feel his hurt too, when it seems like even this attempt has failed.

However, I love that this confuses the hell out of Jack and that in order to find out what it's really about he'll have to talk to Boone again!

Oh, and before I forget - HOT! Very very hot, my dear! Thanks so much for warming up my day!!! *hugs*

[elise_509]

I'm so happy you liked this, hon! :) I've only written Jack/Boone porn once before but I don't know why, since they're fun to write (and sexy to think about, right?)! I'm glad that I could warm up your day. *hugs*

[janie_tangerine]

OMGYES. *flails and squees*

This was... woah. You couldn't feed better my love for the pairing really. The characterization was just so perfect, I could so see Boone trying to gain the upper hand with sex and eventually failing at getting what he wanted in the first place. I loved the translation of the way he failed at his attempts to the way his plan backfired and how he was feeling guilty after all. He'd have been completely uncapable of doing something such as this, bless him and be still my heart. Jack's attitude in the whole of this was just perfect, the mixture between the confused and the fact that he was obviously caring about it was heartwarming. And damn, it was hot. So really hot.

Boone closes his eyes tightly to block the image of Jack out, refusing to admit that the joy he’s taking from this isn’t completely a result Jack’s domination. It’s not because Jack is beautiful and amazing, or that the sight of such a strong man trembling merely from his touch doesn’t make his head swim with desire. It’s not any of those

[elise_509]

\o/ <--- That's me celebrating that you liked this little offering. :) When you requested hearts and minds and your love of boone, I almost wrote another angsty boone & shannon piece but then was like...eh, no. Let's write something porny. :) I'm glad you liked the characterization here, as you're the Boone expert, and I am not experienced at slashing Boone up that much. :) I'm also glad it was hot, because I haven't touched LOST smut in awhile, I've had a hard time porning our darling favorites up with anyone. Oy!

Thanks so much for taking the time to pick out the parts you liked, sweetie. That's so awesome of you. *glomps*

[kellysparrow]

Oh wow, Laura, you've done a great job once again! :D I really love this. I especially love how you describe Boone's feelings, they are very realistic and I'm sure he would feel like this, if it would ever happen. And - even though I don't need to tell you that, because I've done so many times - your Jack is very, very well written. :)

I simply love it, great job!

[elise_509]

Thanks babe! :) That's so nice of you. I'm really glad that you liked it. *hugs* And hey, I've also noticed you writing quite a bit for the luau (I'm way behind on reading because I've been having to do RL school reading, blech, but I will catch up!) but have you/will you be having a queenly day? If yes, then I can't wait to write you something, and if not, then you are simply the coolest. I think it's so awesome when people who haven't had a turn to be queen still participate in the luau, that's so selfless and kind! *hugs again*

[kellysparrow]

You're welcome :) And no, I'm not going to be Queen for a day, alas, I was too late with asking for a date back in the beginning.

But ah well, I like writing and the prompts the Queens are giving out, turn out to be good food for my muse and thus: lots of fic :)

[snookscribbles]

What an amazing fic! So hot and so psychologically intense - which makes it all the hotter! Bravo!

[elise_509]

Thank you so much! And hi! Good to see you! *glomps*

[snookscribbles]

:D Glad to be seen - wish I were around more. I've got your SPN fic bookmarked and I'm looking forward to reading it soon - but these days I'm failing even at lurking.

Believe it or not though, I am writing a little. A short what if fic putting wee!Sawyer in the SPNverse, and a much more massive Jack as John Winchester fic that'll probably take months to complete.

How're you doing? I've enjoyed seeing all your luau fics, but I know you've been busy with RL too.

[siluria]

Ooooh, I really like how you have Boone not being all needy, and Jack all confused. Confused Jack makes me a little bit happy :) This is a really well written fic!!

[elise_509]

Hee, Confused Jack makes me happy too, as long as it's not Kate doing the confusing. I've had about enough of Confused Jack as a result of drive-by Kate-ing. Confused Jack as a result of Boone's Blow Job? A-OK. :) I'm glad that you liked this, sweetie. Thanks for reading!