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elisa_trapt

The Importance of Sex and Pancakes, Chapter 5

Oct 26, 2010 22:56

Title: The Importance of Sex and Pancakes
Rating: NC-17
A/N: Well, we've reached the end here! Thank you to everyone who's gone on this little romp with me. It was fun, I have to admit! But before I give you the final chapter, I have to extend heaps of gratitude on the most fantastic beta ever, supercontenta , who not only chased me around yelling "Smut! You ( Read more... )

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WOW!!! supercontenta October 27 2010, 05:35:24 UTC

*clutches chest*

Well, I...

*stammers*

I... I just can't put into words...

YIPPPEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! A PARADE! FOR ME??!!! This makes me...

(wait for it)

SUPERCONTENTA!!!!!

I can't believe the size, the massive scale of this celebration. And in MY honor??!! I-- I don't deserve this. No, really, I don't. YOU, elisa, it is YOU who deserves this parade. For you are the one who wrote this beautiful fic. This seductive sirens' song. So what do you say? Why don't you join me up here on this pancake float? C'mon, hop on up and wave to the crowd with me! Whatdoyasay?

*offers you a hand*

Re: WOW!!! junebuggy01 October 27 2010, 18:56:48 UTC

Hey, Supes, *nudges you while eating a pancake* you can totally see up the Rockettes' skirts! Teehee!

*sighs* sometimes I wonder how I can be so mature.

Re: WOW!!! elisa_trapt October 28 2010, 02:00:02 UTC

And you wonder why I'm not writing nun_smut for you, pervy girl!

Hey, isn't that your buddy, Walter? *snatches away whipped cream while you look*

Re: WOW!!! junebuggy01 October 29 2010, 22:29:31 UTC

But... But... *pouts* you have to write me nun_smut! If you don't, I'll have to resort to writing my own, Lissy poo! I tried! It's not pretty! Here's a sample of it ( ... )

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YES! BRAVO! kbwaahoo October 27 2010, 12:05:00 UTC

You did it! Fantastic job! I'm like stumbling for words! Pancakes will never look the same! Silvia shirt unbuttoned the visual is heart stopping then pepa drooling! I'm ah... God your good! What a way to start my day! Thank you thank you! *bowing* *smiling* and um *excited!?* way to turn up the heat in that kitchen! You can cook for me anytime!!!!

Re: YES! BRAVO! elisa_trapt October 28 2010, 02:04:53 UTC

Ha ha! I'm glad I got your day off on the right foot!

Yes, certainly Silvia running around in a barely-dressed state would set anyone drooling. You wonder how Pepa managed to stay standing at all! Silvia...such a tease! I think she likes torturing her wife just a little!

Re: YES! BRAVO! kbwaahoo October 28 2010, 03:38:21 UTC

That's what I love about Silvia! She's a playful tease!!! Great job again!
What's next? Hopefully something soon *wink wink* *nudge nudge*

YAY PANCAKES AND WHIP CREAM!! junebuggy01 October 27 2010, 18:54:09 UTC

Why'd she get distracted by sexy Silvia? I wanna know more of Pepa's rules, Lissy poo! BTW, totally your nickname for me simply because I know how much you obviously love it! *smiles*

I really enjoyed this here story of yours and that was just a fabulous ending. So cute and playful and teasing and OMG Silvia in the best outfit a chick can have on, IMHO! So totally! I do have one critique though... where's the nun_smut? xD

Love this story! Love you for writing it and also for the pancakes! *Scoops a handful of whip cream and smears it on your face* I had too much and thought you might like some! *smiles stupidly* Ummm... why are you looking at me like that? Lissy Poo? *Backs up* Okay, now, before you react, remember that I love you. *nods*

Re: YAY PANCAKES AND WHIP CREAM!! elisa_trapt October 28 2010, 02:16:44 UTC

*covers face with hand* OMG. "Lissy poo." I am never going to live this down....

Hmmmm...Pepa's rules? Perhaps that will be the next fic - "Pepa's Guide to Staying Naked." I'm sure Silvia would buy several copies. Though come to think of it...so might Curtis. Perhaps she could write under a pen name.

*clears whip cream out of eye* Now, juney, was that really necessary? Was that mature choice? Because now you've forced my hand...NOW I'm just going to have to do this...*shakes can of whipped cream behind back, whips it around and presses*

Oh no you don't! Come back here! What, you don't like whip cream down the back of your shirt?!...Stop hiding behind that Rockette! I can see you!

Re: YAY PANCAKES AND WHIP CREAM!! junebuggy01 October 29 2010, 22:35:46 UTC

Now, Elisa, think about your actions!I have allies! I've made a friend with one of these here rockettes plus I have my ol' pal Walter here!... *thinks* Though, all the other girls except the one I made friends with didn't really appreciate my comment about being able to see up their skirts... and Walter's pretty much distracted by all the hotness and whipped cream... Yeah... so... ya know... think about the dire consequences!

Re: YAY PANCAKES AND WHIP CREAM!! elisa_trapt October 31 2010, 14:15:58 UTC

I don't think Walter's going to help you much. He looks like Hugh Hefner has been coaching him, b/c from what I can see, he's got like 10 Rockettes surrounding him, and he looks pretty darn happy. Nope, I wouldn't count on him.

And a couple of the Rockettes you were ogling have slipped me some extra whipped cream, and offered to hold you down....*pauses*....wait a second, you'd LIKE that, wouldn't you??? Clever, juney, very clever! You almost got me with that plan...!

bsofthewest October 27 2010, 22:09:40 UTC

I just love our 2 girls in your capable hands...or in their capable hands or you get my drift!

elisa_trapt October 28 2010, 02:18:34 UTC

Aw, thank you! And yes, I agree, both girls have very capable hands. Very capable hands indeed...*waggles eyebrows suggestively*

pantherwalks October 28 2010, 00:14:48 UTC

Hmmnnn...yummy...i mean the pancakes. Yes, the pancakes looks so good. Sorry, now i'm babbling.

Honestly, well done Elisa. This is so good just like pancakes. Especially Pepsi is involved. Yummy!

Is there any more wonderful fic up of your sleeve?

Thank you!

elisa_trapt October 28 2010, 02:21:48 UTC

Ha! Babble away! PepSi and pancakes have that effect. I'm with you - yummy!

I don't know about another fic just yet. I think I've got to take a little break. But you never know when the muse might get me fired up!