Olivia/Peter fanfic: As You Wish

Feb 20, 2011 23:13


Disclaimer: I sadly do not own anything in Fringe. If I did, I would…nothing actually. I am very happy with the writers right now, yes yes.

Spoilers: MASSIVE for 3x14 "6B"

Rating: This is smut, people. M.

A/N: I have started this post-episode (episodic?) fic at 2am, after watching 6B. Once I had stopped crying. But then I was crying again XD And I ( Read more... )

fringe, olivia, fanfic, olivia/peter, peter

Leave a comment

Comments 27

BEST FIC EVER octobre09 February 21 2011, 17:54:22 UTC
Okay so I don`t even know where to start. This was pretty much a PERFECT fic. A perfect combination of romance and naughtiness that did the characters great justice. This will forever be EXACTLY what happened when the screen faded to black. You shouldn`t worry about being able to write smut ever again since this is so hot it left me momentarily incoherent.

I`ll have to reread it when I don`t have a crying teething child asking for my attention so I can fully appreciate it. You rock Ambre, your talent shines once more!

xox

Reply

Re: BEST FIC EVER octobre09 February 21 2011, 17:57:43 UTC
Oh and they are too many great parts to quote them all, but this exchange was by far my favorite one!:

"Just tear it off," she breathed out, and he chuckled as he worked on the buttons, pressing a soft kiss on her lips. "I'm not kidding, I don't care, I have ten other shirts like this one."

"You might need a shirt to get out of the house tomorrow, though," he said, amused, unbuttoning the third button.

He was clearly going as fast as he could this time, sensing her impatience and knowing she had a gun in her coat. But it still wasn't fast enough.

"I'll use one of yours,"

LOVE IT!!!

Reply

Re: BEST FIC EVER elialys February 25 2011, 04:13:50 UTC
Awwwww this part seems to be popular!! Thank you!! :D

And it's funny because I wrote this bit at about 1am between Saturday and Sunday, having written 3,000 words that day and being brainless and basically forcing myself. When this came out, I was "Whaaaaat did I just write??" I realized it was time for me to stop XD

But I'm glad I kept it in when I rewrote most of what came before lmao.

Reply

Re: BEST FIC EVER elialys February 25 2011, 04:08:03 UTC
Em, why are so so so so sweet and kind?? :')

Thank you so much for every single thing you said, it truly make me happy to know that you enjoyed it this much, it means a lot!! :') Especially coming from an awesome smut writer like you!! But I was ridiculous seriously, I had about 10 smut fics opened and I kept going back to them to find synonyms so it wouldn't be redundant lmao My writing process is hilarious really, I think I use wordreference.com about 5000 times when writing a fic that big, and checking an English expression on google every two lines to make sure it's not a weird French/English sentence.

BUT IT WAS ALL WORTH IT.

THANK YOU DARLING!!! ♥

Reply


kc_2009 February 21 2011, 22:45:24 UTC
Wow... this was amazing. Perfect. Your writing is brilliant, and I love how you connect things and make sense of everything. I absolutely loved this fic.

Reply

elialys March 6 2011, 14:00:32 UTC
Thank you so very much for the incredibly kind comment!!

Reply


marymc February 22 2011, 00:22:35 UTC
SQUEEEEE!! Sex!For!Realz! :D

God, I'm in love with these characters. And you write so well. You write them so well. I can totally hear Peter being a smartass while Olivia freaks out. Crossing over! AHAHHAHA!

Anyway, well done. And by all means, give up school and just keep writing. I'd totally support you! In... nutella, or flag waving. That sort of fashion. ;D

Reply

elialys March 6 2011, 14:02:31 UTC
Oh GOD, how I wish I could just spend my days writing Polivia fics, instead of just my weekends ;_; Actually, it was my life in December. Fringe Fringe, writing, Fringe, writing, writing. It was glorious :')

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! And for the nutella and all :'D Check out this LJ later, there's more smutty goodness coming :p

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

elialys March 6 2011, 14:03:23 UTC
Thank you so much!! :D I think you should always end a fluffy fic on a smile-inducing exchange XD

Reply


nath_42 February 22 2011, 20:40:02 UTC
Wow nice scene. I'm glad they finally are together. I liked the episode.

Reply

elialys March 6 2011, 14:04:06 UTC
Thank you so much!! :)) I'm glad they're together too, even though they have trouble coming for them soon X_X

Reply


Leave a comment

Up