Olivia/Peter fanfic: As You Wish

[elialys]

Disclaimer: I sadly do not own anything in Fringe. If I did, I would…nothing actually. I am very happy with the writers right now, yes yes.

Spoilers: MASSIVE for 3x14 "6B"

Rating: This is smut, people. M.

A/N: I have started this post-episode (episodic?) fic at 2am, after watching 6B. Once I had stopped crying. But then I was crying again XD And I

Comments

[sugangel7]

Oh gosh, this was absolutely perfect! So sweet, beautiful, hot and humorous.

"Olivia…" he said softly. "I might not have known that you were gone, I might have made myself believe that I was the reason for the changes…But these changes…She wasn't you. I see that now. And I've missed you."

I really loved this. Reassuring her that he'd missed her, this vulnerable but strong and capable woman that only our Olivia truly is. I'm glad that you didn't ignore the residual awkwardness from the fact that Altlivia has already slept with him, but addressed it in a realistic fashion in which -- in the end -- both Olivia and Peter realize that yes, it's always really been her that he's had feelings for and wanted

[elialys]

Oh you KILLED ME with your comment!! Thank you so so much for being so detailed and so kind!

My head was buzzing sooo much after "6B"; I was of course overwhelmed with happiness because our OTP is so canon, but I had to write what they didn't show us, because there is no way all their insecurities and problems will go away simply because they are going upstairs.

So I'm very glad that the things I focused on felt realistic and in character, there is no nicer compliment you could give me, trust me :')

Thank you again!!

[fervid_fangirl]

Oh my word, this was spectacular. Writing this is totally worth you failing your studies! You should have studied! :)

This is really awesome. And the universe-crossing climax was hot! I laughed and squeed when I read that. I would never have thought of it.

You are def one of my fave Fringe writers.

[elialys]

I live the dangerous student life: PROCRASTINATION RULES OVER EVERYTHING ELSE.

Especially when it involves Polivia!Sex X_X Not that I enjoyed writing it at all, noooo.

I won't take full credit for the universe-crossing climax because I have read similar situations in other fanfics before. But when I saw the episode and how the used the glimmer again linked with her emotions, as soon as I started thinking about writing a fic I KNEW I had to use her "acute emotions" in every possible way XD

Thank you so very much for all your kind words :')

[monkeyprincess7]

Oh my word I need a cold shower after this.

So many wonderful moments in this fic, too many to quote but you nailed Olivia's character here; everything she was thinking, feeling I could see her feeling and thinking. You made her come alive in such a wonderful way.

The way Peter kept whispering 'I missed you' just brought such a warm feeling in my heart, it wasn't just a statement, it was everything he felt and more in that moments. It wasn't just sex for him, it was a way of becoming one, becoming more than just what they were. Guh so beautiful <4

Loved the ending; leave it to Peter to be so smug after it was over, though I'm sure she would have laughed too if she wasn't so drained haha

[elialys]

YOU brought such a warm feeling into my heart with this comment, I'm just going to bask into the awesomeness of it and forget Real Life for a while ♥

I'm so in love with both these characters, I always do my best to respect their personalities and everything they are going through when I write about them, so it makes me so happy that you think it's realistic. Writing this was exhausting and frustrating at times, but it was so worth it, I felt very accomplished once it was done. Now, it seems to be pleasing quite a few Fringies in the fandom, and that is just the delicious cherry on top of it. Or a watermelon, really. I'm delirious.

And you know, in my head, Olivia DOES laugh after Peter's 'fake orgasms' comment, and I almost wrote it. She just can't help it, he's too Peterish and adorable. But ending the story on that funny line was just too tempting. XD

Thank you so much for everything :')

[gaialy]

"You do realize that it's going to make it impossible for you to fake an orgasm ever, right?"

Perfect I have to say:)

[elialys]

Why, thank you :')

[melissa_pbfan]

This was absolutely awesome! <333

[elialys]

Thank you so much!!!

I AM BEING VERY DISTRACTED BY YOUR ICON :')

[melissa_pbfan]

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