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Olivia/Peter fanfic (post-Finale): In Reverse (II)

May 17, 2011 15:03

A/N: Thank you to those of you who commented! And thank you for reading ;-)

Alright. This isn't fluffy at all. Just warning you, okay?

Previous part: I.

( Less than thirty minutes after he wakes up, Peter decides that fate is one sadistic bitch. )

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Comments 10

melissa_pbfan May 17 2011, 19:53:22 UTC

Ah that was so heart-breaking, and so beautiful

when he still foolishly believed that he could be one and not half of a whole

This is my favorite line. I JUST LOVE IT TO PIECES.

I swear, I'll soon go back to times when she's actually not dead. Stick with me, okay?

I'm hanging in there, baby.

elialys May 19 2011, 13:51:50 UTC

Thank you so much!! I know this is very sad, but poor Peter, poor Olivia, they deserve such sadness in times like these ;__;

The next part has been posted and it's definitely brighter...though still not exactly fluffy haha XD

charlie_bz May 17 2011, 20:39:42 UTC

Sad, sad, sad but so very good!

Keep it up!

elialys May 19 2011, 13:53:36 UTC

Thank you so much!! :D

The next part is up! ;-)

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elialys May 19 2011, 13:55:08 UTC

*hugs your heart*

Thank you so much for reading, and writing such a kind comment :')

enna_xor May 19 2011, 06:46:58 UTC

So I honestly didn't get THAT upset when Olivia died on the show, cause I knew that ultimately it wouldn't matter, but reading this is nearly making me tear up. Can't wait for more!

elialys May 19 2011, 13:57:12 UTC

I got really upset when Olivia died on the show LOL! She's by far my forever favorite, and even if it now happened in a timeline that doesn't exist, I felt crushed for days when thinking about it! So I needed more than what we saw on the show.

The next part is posted and it's less sad LOL! Thank you so much for reading :-)

enna_xor May 19 2011, 18:09:36 UTC

I'd accidentally spoiled myself and knew she was gonna die (though I'd known for like a month, so until the second-to-last episode I had no idea how it was all gonna play out), so the death itself somehow wasn't upsetting... But I did get emotional when Peter broke down, and at the funeral. (Though I think somehow Walter and Ella's conversation about Gene got to me the most... O_o)

sugangel7 June 3 2011, 04:50:02 UTC

GAH. Love this. Even though it's totally heartwrenching.

Love this entire part here:

She has seen death, and even though it should be the other way around, she's trying to protect him.

Damn Dunhams, always so fierce.

But he doesn't listen of course. No one in this dying universe can keep him away from her.This just screams PETER to me. Frustrated at those Damn Dunhams who always think of others first, always thinks of protecting others before themselves...even more frustrated because it's the quality he many times loves the most about them -- about her -- too ( ... )

elialys June 13 2011, 15:32:03 UTC

THANK YOU!!! I wrote most of this part at 2am and I was positively drenching my keyboard lol.

I remember after the episode aired, people were saying they would have "loved" to see Peter's reaction and Peter seeing her dead body (which is kind of reassuring, to know I'm not the only one who love watching heartbreaking scenes), so this scene came to me, and then I thought about "A New Day in the Old Town" and it was horribly perfect in my head. I JUST NEED TO HUG HIM.