Rainy days
Title: Rainy days
Pairing: Hyukjae/Donghae
Rating: R
Genre: Fluff, Romance, slight!Humor, mild!Smut
Summary: Donghae is thinking about his dead father and Hyukjae is the one who makes him forget.
A/N: This is my very first time writing a fanfiction. It was supposed to be a fluff but somehow it turned out to be a mild fail!smut.
( And all of sudden I don't feel empty anymore. I don't feel the pain. You're saving me from drawning in the rain. You make all those bad memories just fly away. You're with me. You always are. That's all what matters right now. )
Pairing: Hyukjae/Donghae
Rating: R
Genre: Fluff, Romance, slight!Humor, mild!Smut
Summary: Donghae is thinking about his dead father and Hyukjae is the one who makes him forget.
A/N: This is my very first time writing a fanfiction. It was supposed to be a fluff but somehow it turned out to be a mild fail!smut.
( And all of sudden I don't feel empty anymore. I don't feel the pain. You're saving me from drawning in the rain. You make all those bad memories just fly away. You're with me. You always are. That's all what matters right now. )
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This fic is beautiful, really!
It's the first time I read an EunHae fic that written in first person and so beautiful <3
The smutty part is way sooooooo adorable, nyaaa~^^ so cute and squishy<3
The whole story really touch me TwT Aww~ So lovely, EunHae love~
/frown ="=
Why do you call such awesome fic a fail?!?
Damn... you say you are new to LJ but your writing is better than me, plus your English is way too good! /sigh... should practice more...
Your writing is very good! Write more, please^^! You are a great writer!
Oh and welcome to LJ!
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I really did thought it's a fail 'çause I've read so much better fanfics before!
Don't worry, your english is absolutely good!
Thanks, I definitely will! ^^
<3
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More friends, more funs, you know? kekeke~
I hope we become good friend :)
Hope you'll have more friends who are love EunHae like you & me xD
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you said that is your 1st fanfic?
it's so good, i'm really xD
It's so romance & sweet. *like EunHae LOL*
I love it <3333
Thanks so much^^ *hug*
Can i translate into Vietnamese?
I'll give you the link when I finish. I promise.
P/S: EunHae so cute right? *plz say yes~ wink*
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Yes, yes you can!
<3
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I'm so sorry about that~
here is link: http://litterthing.livejournal.com/3736.html
Write more fic, firl~
I always support to you ^^ Love ya♥
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I'm glad you did it! ^^
I'll write more. I'm writing my 3rd oneshot but I'm really busy with school. It's frustrating. T__T
Thank you very much!
I love you too! <3
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I love your comment! <3333
Thanks for reading! ^^
I will, I will!
♥
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*Goes back to reading* Okay its official. I LOVE YOU ♥
it was so cute, and sweet, and HOT.
Keep writing, you're really good :)
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Thanks, I will! ^^
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Good i will read them all :)
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"It's okay to be gay."
<3
Btw, I'm about to read your fic right now. ^^ I'll comment but I need to pee now.
I'm so random today, sorry! lol
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