origfic: untitled [g]

May 14, 2008 22:50



this isn't, she says, shortly, what i thought it would be like. her fingernails are chipped, ragged, blood in the creases of her pale skin and under the nails; she sees him looking and feels the need to quantify. i don't bite them, she says, quietly, i just-- pick. kind of. it's a bad habit; one day i'll break it.

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aeternitasbeach May 15 2008, 05:58:08 UTC
argh that was good! as in dreamlike and wonderful and at the same time hurtful and real, flowing and choppy, and just yeah, I'm contradicting myself, but it got me *sigh*

(and I have a thing for pieces with nameless people)

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electrumqueen May 15 2008, 20:54:32 UTC
thank you! i'm so, so glad you liked my little 'let's avoid doing work' thingie. =D

(nameless people are the best, because then i don't have to start epics about them. usually.)

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