fic: the sun still burns the shadows out // neal caffrey + peter burke // dollhouse/white collar

[electrumqueen]

dollhouse/white collar fusionthingy, which is creepy and idk, some people said they thought it sounded cool. :)

neal is a doll. peter is the guy who needs him.

part one: the sun still burns the shadows out
blanket warning for consent issues (as are inherent in dollhouse).
pg-13; spoilers for the pilots of both dollhouse and white collar.

Comments

[scorpiod1]

Oh, fuck this was good. And so so creepy and fucked-up and I barely know anything about White Collar but Neeeeaaaal *snuggles* The poor thing, I felt so bad for him here, especially in the first section. Excellent work, darling. <333333

[electrumqueen]

eeeeh, thank you sweetie. :) i often want to cuddle neal, he is so far from okay. esp. in this verse.

[aeternitasbeach]

"i don't care," neal says. he looks away from peter, and the line of his cheekbone is so sharp peter almost can't breathe.
see, it's things like this you write that take my breath away.

but oh man, this was all sorts of achey and brilliant and though I know next to nothing about dollhouse, I found that I did not need to either (but June was totally Adelle wasn't she?) also, neal was so neeeaaaaaaaaaal and peter was appropriately gruff and peter-like and I am fascinated by the dolls! basically, I love it lots and approve of you continuing this 'verse!

[electrumqueen]

<3333333

(yup! but i think i need to work on making june more june than an adelle substitute!). eeeeh, i am glad you liked it! :)))))

[apagon]

ooh, creepy! doll house is such an ethically dubious idea and you just get that across real nicely with peter's guilt and doubts... voices are spot-on... it's beautiful thanks for sharing!

[electrumqueen]

:D thanks so much, i'm glad it worked for you! i was surprised by how well the creepiness of dh meshed with the blue-skyness of wc, tbh.