It's A Wonderful Life, Part II

Dec 20, 2014 23:52


Title: It’s A Wonderful Life
Author: eldorah
Word Count: ~8,000
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Neal, Reese Hughes, Mozzie, Peter/Elizabeth, Jones, Diana, Satchmo, Estelle, Neal Burke 
Spoilers: Up to 6.06 - Au Revoir
Warnings: Angsty moments for Neal, Peter, Mozzie; moment of non-canonical death of a canon character (resolved shortly after)
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eldorah, white collar, fanfiction, reese hughes, neal caffrey, elizabeth burke, peter burke, mozzie

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govgal December 21 2014, 05:41:13 UTC
Breathtakingly brilliant! I wish I had thought of it.

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eldorah December 21 2014, 05:45:06 UTC
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it.. I am so glad you enjoyed it! :)

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kanarek13 December 21 2014, 11:39:09 UTC
OMG, beautiful :D Yes, I just need all those happy ending fics coming my way, heee. They will most certainly be back in each other's lives in no time :D

I can already see summer vacations at Neal's villa in Cote d'Azur, heee :D

Love it, it's perfect and just YAY \o/

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eldorah December 21 2014, 15:04:26 UTC
Yay! So glad you enjoyed this!! Yes, I have no doubt that our boys would be back together in no time. :D Thank you again for the cover!! ::hugs::

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anonymous December 21 2014, 13:54:00 UTC
beautiful!! I need it :-D Marta

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eldorah December 21 2014, 15:04:51 UTC
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this!

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doctor_fangeek December 21 2014, 14:18:13 UTC
I am bawling like a baby right now, but for the best possible reasons. This was beautiful, brilliant, and an utterly fitting continuation of the story of Peter, Neal and the whole gang.

Hughes as the guardian angel! Neal determined to keep doing what he thinks he needs to do to keep everyone safe. Peter's quiet breakdown. Neal's helpful 'date,' asking all the right questions. The new life Neal has made for himself, but the admission that nothing can ever replace his family.

If I'm not careful, I'll just list everything that was in the story...amazing, heartbreaking, but then heartwarming and so very hopeful. Thank you so much for this!

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eldorah December 21 2014, 15:10:12 UTC
Aww, wow, thank you so very much! I am humbled by such kind words! I am so glad you enjoyed this and found it to be a fitting continuation of the story of our beloved characters. Thank you again for taking the time to read and leave feedback, I really appreciate it! :)

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dennih23 December 21 2014, 14:28:55 UTC
This is beautiful. Just so much love in this story. Hughes as the guardian angel is perfect. I love how Neal thinks he is doing the right thing protecting those he loves and how his shown that even by protecting them he was hurting them.

Neal and his ‘date’ were the perfect way to communicate with Peter and of course Mozzie and the bird call :D

Thanks so much for sharing this gem.

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eldorah December 21 2014, 15:11:49 UTC
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and give feedback! I am so happy that you enjoyed it! :)

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