It's A Wonderful Life, Part II

Dec 20, 2014 23:52


Title: It’s A Wonderful Life
Author: eldorah
Word Count: ~8,000
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Neal, Reese Hughes, Mozzie, Peter/Elizabeth, Jones, Diana, Satchmo, Estelle, Neal Burke 
Spoilers: Up to 6.06 - Au Revoir
Warnings: Angsty moments for Neal, Peter, Mozzie; moment of non-canonical death of a canon character (resolved shortly after)
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eldorah, white collar, fanfiction, reese hughes, neal caffrey, elizabeth burke, peter burke, mozzie

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pipilj December 21 2014, 14:37:03 UTC
This is beautiful love the idea of Hughes being Peter guardian angel. It was so sad to see everyone reaction to Neal's death almost hearing him or seeing him. Glad you added a reunion in the end. Of course Mozzie would also come

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eldorah December 21 2014, 15:12:57 UTC
Thank you so much!! Yes, I imagine Mozzie will be on the first plane to Paris as soon as he learns of Neal's whereabouts. :) Thank you again!!

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leesa_perrie December 21 2014, 15:39:22 UTC
Heart-wrenchingly beautiful, thank you.

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eldorah December 21 2014, 15:49:54 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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jpgr December 21 2014, 16:59:33 UTC
That ending in the cafe was kind of what I was hoping for, especially after a recent viewing of a certain Christian Bale movie I won't name in case there are people who haven't seen in.

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eldorah December 21 2014, 17:46:51 UTC
I'm glad the ending was what you wanted to see! I am not sure of the movie you are referencing, but I will have to look it up. Now I am intrigued.

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave feedback! :)

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anonymous December 21 2014, 22:19:31 UTC
I absolutely love the movie and I think the essence is so true. That was a nice twist of the post finale events. Great story.

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eldorah December 22 2014, 02:32:39 UTC
Thank you so much. I am so glad that you enjoyed this!! :)

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sandy79 December 21 2014, 23:11:37 UTC
Oh sweetie, this is heartbreaking beautiful! I hardly cry while reading, but especially the first part with Neal's heartbreak and helplessness had me in tears. While the second part brought some hope and joy into my heart that the story of the epic bromance between Neal and Peter will continue in another volume. Thank you for sharing this gem! Happy Holidays!

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eldorah December 22 2014, 02:34:42 UTC
Aww, thank you so very much. I am so glad that you enjoyed reading this. As you said, Peter and Neal do have such an epic bromance that is hard for me to imagine that it would do anything but continue, even though they are so many miles apart. Thank you again for reading and leaving feedback! :) Happy Holidays!

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