Illegal Palpitations (Chapter 2)

[curionenene]

Title: Illegal Palpitations
Rating: NC-17 (for this chapter)
Genre: Romance, Humor, Drama
Pairing: Donghae/Hyukjae
Warning: Smut, coarse language 
Summary: It sucks when you’re boyfriend is on the other side of the law, but the rewards for hanging on and believing in that love are much more than Donghae and Hyukjae can ever imagine.

Role-play with tees2mai: She

Comments

[smhorez95]

is this bad???? with kyuhyun knowing hmhmhmhmhm

[curionenene]

lolol hmmmmmmmmm i wonder XD

[loveloveheechul]

this is exactly how i want them to be
hyuk is not too weak and girly , yet not too strong so that he'll be independent to hae
and hae being all manly yet sweet and romantic as in reality
oh so love them
yes poor hyuk ,he had to see hae doing his job
but poor hae too, having to do it in front of ur love
i think it's even harder for him
oh i so want a lil twisted here , like kyu love hyuk too and try to frame hae
well i always love triangle kyueunhae XDDD
oh and donghae , if u dare to call hyuk big nose ever again i'm so gonna steall that big nose guy from u

[curionenene]

LOLOL.

donghae: /snort try if you can /hugs hyukjae protectively

[rubyjn]

/snorts
Kyu-puppy; a truly amusing sight conjured by my mind. And walking him and giving him affection...hahaha!

Be careful my two Lees-in-love~!

[curionenene]

hehehe kyu puppy XDDDDD

[noroimono]

this is my new fav fic that i stalk and really look forward to updates.

i like how hyuk is kinda manly but also quite submissive, but not in a girly way.
and hae's love for him is just so awwwwwwwwwww~!

this "forbidden" relationship is also pretty hot. especially when they met in this chapter.
i know i should have been sad that hyuk had to go through being a hostage and etc.
but i found hae really hot when he was being a gangster XD

and kyu finding out sounds a bit ominous, lets hope no one from hae's side finds out.
kyuhyuk seems like they have a good working relationship

thanks for sharing ♥

[curionenene]

yes well. these two compartmentalize their relationship quite well. lolol.

[brattygurl2011]

I don't know where you're from but here in the US there's a story of the Hatfields and McCoys who are two families who hate and feud with each other yet their children fall in love (similar to romeo & juliet) and this story has similar classic elements. Hyuk and Hae's families aren't blood families but they are part of these groups and are treated like family.

It was only a matter of time before someone would have noticed what was going on between Hyuk and Hae. They couldn't have hidden their relationship forever. I'm not sure if Kyu is a "good" or "bad" guy in terms of revealing what he knows or what his motive is for keeping it a secret. I'm not trusting Kyu yet.

[curionenene]

lolol. yeah well. this fic is as trophey as you can get. ^^

you'll just have to see ^^