this skin we're in is ours to keep

Dec 29, 2011 23:36

this skin we're in is ours to keep
donghae/eunhyuk
r
5976 words
Breakable doesn't mean unrepairable. Hyukjae is more than a little broken. Donghae is too.

This fic contains cross dressing and gender issues. I tried dealing with both topics in what I hope is a respectful way.

They lie on the back of Donghae’s truck and wait for sunrise, counting stars and tracing constellations, imagining galaxies that are brighter and better than theirs. )

pairing: donghae/eunhyuk, genre: au, author: the super awfadtco, fandom: super junior, length: one-shot, rating: r

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poisonpickles December 30 2011, 04:39:43 UTC
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(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✿♥
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Yeah okay if you really allow me to take even the tiniest bit of responsibility for this I will be honored ;A;
You've probably heard that your writing is beautiful a million times but idk how else to describe it. I can never find the right words for your fics. They make my word bank go... blank 8(
I just want to endlessly compliment you idek what to say about the fic other than I love it and your Eunhae is always flawless and write more things ;(

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drawingintheair January 3 2012, 17:25:05 UTC
LOL this entire comment. Why are you like this Dani?

I'm thrilled you liked this. This fic made me nervous but I'm glad it turned out the way it did. Thanks for reading :3

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eunhae_holic86 December 30 2011, 04:46:21 UTC
spot

How you do this ?
i couldnt stop reading or tears my eyes away of the screen tell the last line of this piece of art ..♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
i love the way you writ there is alwayes hidden meaning in there .( why hae is a repairer? coz he will repair hyuks life they will do it they still young FIGHTING (--) )
I wonder if someday i will watch movie for your stories
like JK.rowling ^^
not a fan of vampires hehehhehehe
I hate hyukkies mom she is selfish she ruined her son life DX
LUV YAAAAAAAAAAAA *HUGS *

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drawingintheair January 3 2012, 17:30:54 UTC
Dude idk about the movie thing or the JK Rowling comparison but I am majorly flattered :D Not to worry about the vampires since I'm not a fan either lmao

Thanks for reading~

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munchymochi December 30 2011, 05:08:13 UTC
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drawingintheair January 3 2012, 17:33:14 UTC
Your icon is adorable /squishes his face

Thanks for reading ♥

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lycheejello December 30 2011, 05:11:22 UTC
ummm.. in all honesty, im starting to feel a little creepy with all of the "omg youre awesome" "i love your stories" comments i've left you. but.. seriously, you're awesome and i love your stories :D

You really have a knack for developing the tone to your fics.. I was just re reading the drabbles you wrote for Our Last Days as Children (which are SOOO good btw) and it was amazing how you invoked such a warm summery feeling in me, despite it being the dead of winter right now -___- In the same way, this fic was SO oppressing, i could literally feeeeeeeel the tension as I was reading this.

so yea.. awesome as always XD and I second poisonpickles above ...write more pleaseeeeeeee <3 <3

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drawingintheair January 3 2012, 17:38:26 UTC
You're not being creepy at all! Trust me I've seen creepy and your comments are anything but. Oppressing is the perfect word to describe the tone of this fic but it's also suppression since it's a bit of Hyuk's doing as well.

Thank you and I definitely hope to write more in the new year <3

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hutatsu December 30 2011, 07:44:28 UTC
oh my god.

i have been meaning to go back and comment on some of your other fics but i can't just leave this one without saying that this is just lovely and as usual your imagery of settings and characters are so beautifully intertwined and the better world ugh. the way you write is just so inspiring and always, always leaves an impression on me.

your characterization of these two is always captivating and i love the way you write their interactions i refer to you as the 'eunhae goddess' in my mind; especially their non-verbal interactions. ugh.

i'm always doing this but i'm going to come back later and leave a proper comment. i just can't read this and not flail a bit over it and sob a little and ugh i feel like there is so much 'rough elegance' in your writing i don't even know anymore lol. yea.

akjdnkjgnkjadgsnkasjgn so beautiful, thank you for sharing <3

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drawingintheair January 3 2012, 17:44:06 UTC
I never quite know what to say to comments like these but I'm glad you liked this and appreciate any and all sort of feedback. It's readers like you what make me excited to share my writing on the net so thank you so much, really <3

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hutatsu January 5 2012, 21:56:44 UTC
i’m really glad you share your writing, your prose and characterization is something i find beautiful to read; also the emotion with which you can evoke from the relationships between the characters is always potent. i think that this would come through even if i wasn’t already a part of the fandom, that if you take it out of context of ‘eunhae from super junior’ the impact would still be there and i love that. because i think that you are able to take the ‘known’ sort of dynamic of eunhae and build on it without relying too heavily on the readers knowledge of all the little things fandoms create…okay, I don’t know if that makes much sense but yea. i guess what i’m trying to say is that even if you were to change them to some other original characters (which they already sort of are? OTL ) the feeling would still be there. which can maybe be taken as either bad or good but i find it as a good thing. alright, moving on.

‘Always too in love with the light, the openness, that sense of being protected from the world but not hidden ( ... )

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drawingintheair January 6 2012, 00:14:46 UTC
I have to say out of all the people who read my fic and comment I think you're one of the most realistic level headed ones. Yo have this sharp grasp on the fact that fiction is fiction and despite this being based off real people, no matter how realistic a fic seems or if the whole fandom lauds it a staple in the fandom, it isn't reality. That it's called fiction for a reason but a lot of people seem to forget that and get lost in the fantasy. It's just nice to encounter someone in the eunhae fandom who can distinct the fictional Donghae and Eunhyuk from the real people.

I think it's a bad and a good thing? Like if you can insert just about anyone in to my fics like say Taeyang from Big Bang and Yoseob from Beast (my god that is a weird combination) and it wouldn't change the characterization I've written than I would say it's a bad thing lol. But I like the fact that you'd feel for them if they weren't Eunhhyuk and Donghae and I think it's a good thing in that sense ( ... )

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