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"Bingo" Chapter One - Part I -

Jan 05, 2010 21:01

Title: Bingo
Chapter: One: Part I
Author: El Kitano
Rating: R for ninja language and ninja violence
Summary: In the time directly following the Uchiha massacre, an ANBU team consisting of Kakashi, Gai, and Tenzou is deployed to search for the missing-nin Itachi Uchiha. Unknown to all but a select few, the mission is really a sham in order to provide ( Read more... )

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<3 jbadgr January 6 2010, 05:54:45 UTC

I love that your characterisations are soooooooooo spot on. It's ridiculous how much I want this to be animated in the stead of the manga. Shikamaru- lol. And poor Tenzou getting the 'Waiting' treatment. ONWARD TO PART II!

Re: <3 el_kitano January 6 2010, 06:14:15 UTC

I adore bitty Shikamaru. I should just make him an ANBU so he can come along. :)

wind_hover January 7 2010, 14:50:55 UTC

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el_kitano January 7 2010, 22:41:55 UTC

Another page critique! When Shikamaru asked if he used wood-jutsu, he's was being a sarcastic little dill-weed.

I think that in the show, the Third went through mood-swings. He'd be calm most of the time, but then something random (usually Naruto) would set him off.

Tenzo will get an opportunity to prove himself!

I have to remember to save all your comments for when I'm editing >.