Family Reunion part III - FINALLY -_-;

Sep 13, 2009 21:31

Title: Family Reunion: Happiness
Characters: Ace, Luffy & their crews
Rating: G
Pairings: Luffy/food, Ace/sleep
Beta: naye

I started this the day I posted Healing on August 26th! Have been Writer's Blocked since then =_=

On a happier note - ACE & LUFFY FLUFF! To counter all the angst I've been writing =_=

For people new to the story, part I is Home
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family reunion, whitebeard pirates, fic, d brothers & others, strawhats, one piece

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arcielfreeder September 14 2009, 07:46:20 UTC
WAAAHHHHH~~ I love how everyone gets shocked by Luffy!!! XD

And about the brother-cousin thing-- OMG! Made me laugh at Luffy's childish innocence!! ADORABLE!!

*squees*

And cool!!! Are you a psychic?? XD

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eiliem September 14 2009, 07:57:33 UTC
Lols - it's especially funny because the doujinshi naye translated had almost that same exchange except it was "I didn't know I had a brother!" - and, again, I wrote that line a month ago! XXXPPP (fangirl hivemind GO!)

Muahaha - sekritly I...am a flea who lives in Oda's brain!

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arcielfreeder September 14 2009, 08:03:10 UTC
YOU ARE SO GREAT!!!!! XD *bows down to greatness*

Muahaha - sekritly I...am a flea who lives in Oda's brain!

Gyahahahaha!! That made me \o/! XD

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eiliem September 14 2009, 08:05:02 UTC
Well...not so great, this took me nearly a month to finish ;_;

damned writer's block

(Shhhh, don't give away my secret! ;)

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miyorin September 14 2009, 08:07:54 UTC
I have dreamed this scene before.
Wonderful<3

"People who interrupted Whitebeard’s naps got thrown through walls. Ace knew this well."

THIS MADE ME LOL.
BADLY!
I love your fics!

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eiliem September 14 2009, 08:11:05 UTC
XD

Ah yes, Ace!fail - lol!!!

^___^ *feels accomplished*

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shayera September 14 2009, 08:15:11 UTC
^_____________________________________^

This made me smile and aww and squee SO HARD.

The descriptions of the Strawhats! You nailed them all perfectly by their oddness, and it's ♥ (I love the image of Chopper lecturing Shirohige!)

There really was - and Ace knew this better than anyone - no getting used to Luffy.

Hee! Nope, there isn't! Every day is a new adventure!

People who interrupted Whitebeard’s naps got thrown through walls. Ace knew this well.

BWAH!!!

And then Luffy eats and someone asks inconsiderate questions, and Luffy just being there and saying simple things defuses the tension. *love* Sometimes, stupid badly-made little brothers are the best kind. ♥

"And if they’re all your brothers does that make them my brothers too?"

LUFFY!! ♥♥♥

And then they're his cousins and that's even more exciting! XD

But after Ace fell asleep mid-sentence for the third time in less than a minute

Aceee. Only Ace could manage THAT. XD

(And Oars is alright!)

The ending is beautiful. ♥

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eiliem September 14 2009, 08:27:35 UTC
^______^

And then Luffy eats and someone asks inconsiderate questions, and Luffy just being there and saying simple things defuses the tension. *love* Sometimes, stupid badly-made little brothers are the best kind. ♥

That was...I wrote that line like, right after chapter 550, that was one of the first side-notes I wrote

OMG I've been working on this fic since mid-July! o_o orz

And then they're his cousins and that's even more exciting! XD

Ahaha XP

Of course Oars is alright! &hearts Nobody dies in One Piece!

I'm glad you like the ending! The last line was heavily inspired by naye's Seadream &hearts

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shayera September 14 2009, 08:35:20 UTC
That was...I wrote that line like, right after chapter 550, that was one of the first side-notes I wrote

Because you're a genius, obviously. And it's such a simple and Luffy sort of thing to say. Ace doesn't like to talk about it (so don't). ^___^

OMG I've been working on this fic since mid-July!

But it's worth it! Because it's squeeful!

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eiliem September 14 2009, 08:40:21 UTC
Luffy logic is happymaking &hearts

But it's worth it! Because it's squeeful! thank you

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elvenarchress September 14 2009, 13:16:01 UTC
Without trying, Luffy breaks brains XD (when he puts his mind to it, he breaks reality)

Love how Ace (and the Strawhats) LOL at the Whitebeard pirates trying to make sense of Luffy (talk about an exercise in futility)... Ah, the arrogance of the experienced XXDD cause they had their own WTF moments (about 10sec after they met the rubber boy) and survived. let us pray for the WB pirates' brains XD

... ensure his captain got have a hot meal himself, or some such stupid thing...should "have" be there?

“Ooooh, I’ve never had a cousin before!”
and now you have 1598 (not counting Thatch) XD go Luffy XD your birthday's going to be something else (provided time actually passes in OP)

when the Strawhats leave, the WB pirates will give them a Den Den Mushi so they can call him over whenever Ace gets angsty...Luffy the universal cure for unhappiness

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eiliem September 14 2009, 17:23:03 UTC
(when he puts his mind to it, he breaks reality)

lol - too true &hearts

should "have" be there?

ha, thanks for catching that

Yay Luffy and his extended family XP

when the Strawhats leave, the WB pirates will give them a Den Den Mushi so they can call him over whenever Ace gets angsty...Luffy the universal cure for unhappiness

*likes this idea*

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elvenarchress September 15 2009, 03:51:35 UTC
no prob XD I love your fics <3

glad the idea amuses you XD here's another one: when Ace wakes up, he finds that Oars has found the world's largest rubber band met his brother.

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eiliem September 14 2009, 17:26:22 UTC
XP Luffy adopting the Whitebeard pirates is a happy happy thought.

And muahahaha - overprotective nakama ftw

And Ace, oh you can still see that he's not fully okay but that he's getting better and I love it so much! And love forever to Luffy who makes things better without even trying to.

^_____________^

(And lol forever at Ace and the Straw Hats just sitting back to watch the chaos)

aahahahaha - best place to be &hearts XP

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