Tiny!Ace & Tinier!Luffy the 9th ( Or, further proof that I am, in fact, a horrible person)

[eiliem]

Title: Heartbeats
Characters: tiny!Ace, tinier!Luffy, Garp, Dadan
Pairing: Luffy/beetle
Rating: G
Beta: naye&hearts thank you for the title!

So naye writes beautiful fluffy happy brother fic and I write...this.

Comments

[peachpai]

D: Poor Ace! But I do love Garp showing his soft side for the boys. ♥

[eiliem]

Garp and his boys is...&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts

yes, poor Ace - he has to deal with Oda and me! *pets him*

[shayera]

Poor kids. *snuggles them*

This one is more edited than the one I read before! I love the way you expanded the ending, with Garp holding Ace and comforting him and of course he had moments like that, too. Garp ♥

[eiliem]

^^ naye wondered how Garp and Dadan got there in time to save the boys to I had to explain ^^

Garp is...I love Garp.

That whole family I. Just. Love them all so much

*sniffs at crying!Garps ;_;*

He - they're his boys and in my experience family = snuggles :D

snuggles are happy&hearts *joins in the snuggling*

[arcielfreeder]

OOOOOOOOHHH~~ worried!dadan, worried!garp and worried!ace~~

They're all such worrywart under those tough masks but that makes them so lovable!!! <3

*loves* OF COURSE!!

[eiliem]

^^

Family love makes me happy &hearts

(even when I'm giving them all heart attacks) ^^;

[arcielfreeder]

even when I'm giving them all heart attacks

That made me laugh out loud! i'm gonna have a heart attack too

[elisha2kings]

Good GOD! I mean, I knew this wasn't an AU and the boys were gonna live, but you still had me on pins and needles when Luffy WASN'T BREATHING! Gah! And Dandan trying to hide the fact from and Garp fussing over his boys! Stop playing a concerto with heartstrings, damn it!

Yeah, old protective instincts rising to surface when you consider how brain dead Luffy is and how much trouble he must've been for his family! Try having reckless kid brother and a wandering baby sister who are 7 years and 13 years younger than you respectively!

[eiliem]

Stop playing a concerto with heartstrings, damn it!

I...can't help it? *blames Oda*

Garp fussing over his boys

= me happy ^^

try having reckless kid brother and a wandering baby sister who are 7 years and 13 years younger than you respectively!

ouch, I feel for you

[eiliem]

I was very frightened during the first part. You wrote the tension well.

Muahaha- I mean, I'm glad you liked it ^^

And it was lovely to see Garp fussing over his grandchildren.

&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts

It's an older sibling thing, I suppose.

And how! O_O

*hugs*

[eiliem]

^^; yeah, okay so I'm shamelessly evil.

XP

It's all Oda's fault!!!

He started it! He made Ace into an angst muffin and I started writing Ace angst and the angst just spread through my brain like Ace!fire

I blame my maternal instincts and the fact that I have troublesome siblings

*hears you*