Tiny!Ace & Tinier!Luffy the 9th ( Or, further proof that I am, in fact, a horrible person)

[eiliem]

Title: Heartbeats
Characters: tiny!Ace, tinier!Luffy, Garp, Dadan
Pairing: Luffy/beetle
Rating: G
Beta: naye&hearts thank you for the title!

So naye writes beautiful fluffy happy brother fic and I write...this.

Comments

[feriowind]

Gaaaaaaah, I just LOVE how you wrote Garp! :'D It just gives me the warm fuzzies when he shows the love that he has for his grandchildren, and even though Ace was adopted, they're still a big happy family~!! *loves forever*

[eiliem]

^^ Thank you, I like to think that my love for these characters gets translated a bit into my writing &hearts

It just gives me the warm fuzzies when he shows the love that he has for his grandchildren

&hearts&hearts&hearts

[noodlesticks]

DD:

Why do you keep trying to kill the little D's!?

Just kidding. Your angst is just as brilliant as your fluff. ♥ But being a big sister to a mischievous little brother, this fic hits haaarrdd.

[eiliem]

...I...I don't mean to!! o_o

It just...happens!

It's like there's this scale in my head: if there is angst, I shall write fluff! ...If there is fluff, I must write angst?

I started out fluffy! I did! All my earlier fic were fluffy!happy!cuddly brothers! &hearts

And then it's like my brain said "Enough! We must balance with out with angst of D00M!" :(

But being a big sister to a mischievous little brother, this fic hits haaarrdd.

*winces in sympathy*

Yeah...I, uh, realized a little while ago that most of my Ace!panicking-about-Luffy writings can be traced back to me worrying about my baby sister Bee ^^;

[eiliem]

^^

Yes I...am evil.

Um...? Sorry? *hands you a lollipop and runs away*

I'm glad you liked it :D

[naye]

Love it. SO. MUCH!

Oh, Garp. Taking care of his little ones, because they can break, and that would be bad.

And Ace! Poor, panicked little Ace. Panicked and concussed - you are mean. XD

But at least he's got his little brother to snuggle and aww, the two of them together do make me happy. Even when they've been bruised and battered and are a little worse for wear.

[eiliem]

Oh, Garp. Taking care of his little ones, because they can break, and that would be bad.

&hearts

It's funny, I'm getting all these comments talking about things like Garp & snuggling and it's like - "that's why I wrote it like this!"

:DDDD

D family &hearts&hearts

Panicked and concussed - you are mean. XD

*Is a bad person* you can't talk

But at least he's got his little brother to snuggle and aww, the two of them together do make me happy.

I knoooow they are so much love &hearts

[elvenarchress]

Felt like someone was squeezing my heart in a vice back there...And yet I adore the family love *hearts*

Ace must have become one heck of a swimmer thanks to Luffy xD

why do i get the feeling when Dadan/Garp looks in on them they'll find Ace asleep with his on Luffy's chest...all the better to hear his little brother's heart beat ^^

[eiliem]

Muahaha, all your heartz are belong to me XP

I mean, I'm gald you like the fic ^^

Ace must have become one heck of a swimmer thanks to Luffy xD

...too bad he's useless at it now XXXPPPPP

why do i get the feeling when Dadan/Garp looks in on them they'll find Ace asleep with his on Luffy's chest...all the better to hear his little brother's heart beat

^^ brother snuggling &hearts