Whip Collection Coord (Concrit Wanted)

[meltypenguin]

Hey, EGL! It's been quite a while. (I don't think I've been on here in at least a year!) Seeing as I've gained a few pieces of brand, I thought I'd ask for some good, old-fashioned concrit for my OOTD. (COTD?) I would also greatly appreciate accessory suggestions!

Comments

[meltypenguin]

Thank you so much! I think the idea of adding more white is fantastic, I have a few white bows I can stick on my head, lol. Don't have pink shoes yet, but am planning on getting some soon!

[vatalanta]

Lovely. I do agree on some more white in a shape of a bag. Otherwise a pink pair of shoes with blue bowclips on, would be terrible cute instead.

I have sadly not no plans.

[meltypenguin]

Ooh, nice! Blue and pink shoes would be adorable!

[maemerrily]

Cute coord, I love the pearls! If it were me, I'd add some extra accessories to spice up the blouse in addition to the necklace, like clip-on suspenders or a bow neck tie. Maybe like these in a matching pink colors?

[meltypenguin]

Thank you! That sounds so cute, I'll have to try it out!

[silveretoile]

I feel right now the outfit is kinda 'blocky'; the top is pretty good with the blue and pink mixed very well (although you might want to shift the bow more to the side or get the actual headbow, as right now it's kinda helicoptering on your head) but then the bottom is just all white. I'd do pink socks and shoes in the color of the skirt instead.

[meltypenguin]

Thank you so much! Yeah, I did feel like something was a bit off. Looking at it again, the blockiness of the bottom is definitely the problem. The next shoes I buy are going to be pink, for sure! ;) Thanks for the tip on the bow!

[silveretoile]

Glad I could help!