Whip Collection Coord (Concrit Wanted)

[meltypenguin]

Hey, EGL! It's been quite a while. (I don't think I've been on here in at least a year!) Seeing as I've gained a few pieces of brand, I thought I'd ask for some good, old-fashioned concrit for my OOTD. (COTD?) I would also greatly appreciate accessory suggestions!


Outfit Rundown
Head Accessories: Whip Collection detachable bow, offbrand (square) ball hair ties.
Blouse: Thrifted
Accessories: BTSSB necklace, offbrand pearl bracelets, AP purse with AP phone charm.
Skirt: AP's Whip Collection
Socks: AP
Shoes: Bodyline

Thanks in advance!

~Bonus Question~
Have any of you started planning coords for ILD yet?