title: holy water cannot help you now
series: 30 Days of Caroline
author: Eena
rating: 14, for swears
disclaimer: I have disclaimed
pairings/characters: caroline forbes, klaus mikaelson, caroline/klaus, stefan salvatore, damon salvatore, elena gilbert, bonnie bennett, kol mikaelson, elijah mikaelson, matt donovan
spoilers: up to 3.15, “All My
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The prose is perfect. Each word is imbued with funny-because-she's-hysterical-freaky-outy-desperate-Caroline language that makes it perfect and hilarious and heartbreaking. And I love how you chose to showcase the relationship between Stefan and Caroline because I loved their friendship so much last season and not seeing it is sad ( ... )
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You are far too kind. Thanks so much for the all the praise.
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Okay, I loved this. I loved Caroline being unable to stop herself from snarking at dangerous vampires. I loved Caroline being afraid (which is so freaking sensible, my god). I lovedlovedloved having some outside reaction to Klaus freaking courting Caroline. I loved that Caroline's house was Grand Vampire Station. I loved Caroline's not-apology to Klaus (omg, my heart). And I love, SO MUCH LOVE, the interaction between Stefan and Caroline, which we have been long denied.
Oh. And this line: Stefan and Damon are assholes and she hates them more than she likes them most days, but she thinks that a century or two down the road they’ll be the only family she has left and she wants that, wants it more than anything. She doesn’t handle an hour of loneliness well; she wouldn’t know what to do with an eternity of it. That line?
It killed me. I am slain.
Also! Caroline's snarky thoughts about why they all spell things with K? Priceless.
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BECAUSE MY FLIST IS FULL OF THE BESTEST PEOPLE ON THE PLANET, WITH YOU RIGHT THERE AT THE TOP!
I'm so glad you liked it, as it's been slow on the fic front lately. Can't seem to write a drabble to save my life, and can't keept it to a normal 2K oneshot either.
*Le sigh*
Thanks for the love bb.
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The sheer panic in the beginning, Stefan’s warnings ( Once you do, you're his-and he is very jealous about all his possessions. I mean, SERIOUSLY, how perfect…), the slow progression and the speech at the end where she practically tells him all her complicated feelings about him, about herself, it left me speechless.
Then there’s the thing that all the Mikaelsons seem to ship Klaroline xD
Besides, Klaus daggers everyone. It's not even like he really means it anymore. I loved your Kol just as much as I love the canon version. He’s such a precious little troll. <3
Anyway, to sum up, this was perfect. I’ll never get enough of your fics <3
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*g*
Glad you liked it. you and your glowing praise are too good to me.
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It's deserved. I'm rereading some of your older stories at the moment and now I'm starting to miss all the Daroline and Steroline ;)
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Very beautifully written!
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The Klaus-Caroline talk in the end is so sad but so beautiful. I really love it.
And yes. I do think that happened to Finn. Why else would he agree to kill himself and all of his family?
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll fix that little typo right away.
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