Comments | edonohana: Ninja Tell Stories. Naruto. No spoilers. 100 words.

edonohana

Ninja Tell Stories. Naruto. No spoilers. 100 words.

Apr 06, 2006 10:12

For telophase, a riff on her own request for a story about a certain ninja.

( Ninja tell stories )

Comments 18

darksideofstorm July 8 2006, 11:06:45 UTC

That's beautiful. I love the butterfly-effect feel to it.

On a side note, the word 'chakra' should not be pluralized, much like 'ninja'. There's no such thing as 'ninjas', but there are ninja. See the difference?

edonohana July 10 2006, 04:21:44 UTC

You're quite right: one samurai, two samurai, seven samurai. Fixed!

Also, thank you very much.

lydzi July 9 2006, 10:05:06 UTC

NARUTO HOKAGE! Yep ^^. Thanks to Iruka. That man is great. I love it when he smiles :). Arigato for this drabble: it brings sun to the heart ^^.

rilina_fic July 31 2006, 12:20:44 UTC

Belatedly commenting on this drabble. Oh, Iruka! There needs to be more Iruka fic like this in the world.

(I am bitter because I only find Kakashi/Iruka fic when I look for Iruka fic. That is one pairing I simply do not grok.)

rachelmanija July 31 2006, 17:47:40 UTC

...they're both adult males?

Thanks!

rilina_fic July 31 2006, 23:41:16 UTC

...they're both adult males?
Yeah, that's pretty much the only logic I can figure out. Maybe when the series was younger it seemed like they would have more interactions? Instead of, you know, one?

gonrie October 7 2008, 20:29:42 UTC

So short but so damn GOOD!!
Sincerely, I don't normally read little drabble but this one is so...true!!
Good job!!