fic: when the grass turns blue (ai rpf, dcook/carrie)

Jan 02, 2010 09:38

Title: when the grass turns blue
Author: empressearwig
Pairing/Fandom: David Cook/Carrie Underwood, Carrie Underwood/Mike Fisher; American Idol RPF
Rating: PG-13 (for language, mostly)
Word Count: 2800
Disclaimer: I own nothing, this is all for fun. This didn’t happen. Probably. Etc.
Summary: Carrie gets engaged. Dave gets drunk.
Author's Notes: For irishmizzy. Sometimes ( Read more... )

person: david cook, person: neal tiemann, pairing: david cook/carrie underwood, person: carrie underwood, fandom: american idol rpf

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jehane_writes January 2 2010, 15:23:11 UTC
...and the announcement of that particular engagement did find a bittersweet reception with me, too.

Heartfelt and lovely, and a killer last paragraph. Great way to turn this into fic, bb <3

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empressearwig January 3 2010, 13:50:16 UTC
Good to know it wasn't just me! Thank you so much!

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otherbella January 2 2010, 15:33:16 UTC
oh my.

this is beautiful.

The way you cut through Cook's million winding thought and all the ~emotions he always has swirling through his brain is just excellent. I LOVED this. I liked the simple, quiet interaction with Neal and the mentions of Andrew and just WOW. Pieces that take place in these guys' heads are kind of my favorite.

A++ fic.

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empressearwig January 3 2010, 13:56:35 UTC
Yay, thank you so much! Cook can be so tricky to pin down because he's the way you say, so thank you for thinking it sounded right. Thank you!!!

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lire_casander January 2 2010, 15:58:06 UTC
Isn't this bittersweet and completely amazing.

I don't know what to say. You've captured the essence of heartbreak in this. *bows at your awesomeness*

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empressearwig January 3 2010, 13:55:30 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! For reading and the nice things you said. It means more than you can know. Thank you!!

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perfectlystill January 2 2010, 17:42:00 UTC
This is so beautiful and heartbreaking and just feels me with all of these very sad feelings, that, strangely enough, I kind of like being filled with. You did such a great job with this that I can hardly leave you any coherent feedback. Your David voice is excellent and just seems to be the most perfect thing. And the heartbreak he feels really resonates and I just want to give him a hug (even if he doesn't want one).

Also, when I heard Carrie was engaged I was so, so happy for her, and then I was kind of sad, and that is your fault. So. Thank you for writing this to make that up to me, when two months ago I would have just been happy.

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empressearwig January 3 2010, 13:58:49 UTC
You are the sweetest. Thank you so much!!

Heeeeee, I felt the same way. And I will totally take the blame for that type of thing, gladly will I take the blame. Thank you!!! <3<3

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empressearwig January 3 2010, 13:54:39 UTC
Me, too. Me, too. Thank you for reading!!

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