fic: it always comes around (disney rpf, nick/miley, 4/4)

Sep 12, 2009 15:21

Title: It Always Comes Around
Author: empressearwig
Pairing: Nick/Miley
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,100 for this part
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I own nothing, this is all for fun. This didn’t happen. Etc.
Summary: Two weeks in June.
Author’s Notes: I was going to finish this before I started posting, but then I realized just how long it was going ( Read more... )

person: kevin jonas, multi-chapter: it always comes around, person: joe jonas, person: nick jonas, pairing: nick jonas/miley cyrus, fandom: disney rpf, person: miley cyrus

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jazzish September 12 2009, 21:00:43 UTC
I continue to be baffled by the way you weave all these little facts in there. Like the bet! It just fitted in so effortlessly in their conversation. Perfect!

I love the hopeful feel of this. They love each other, and that's all that matters. They'll be okay. And I'm overinvested, but I hope that's the case irl, too. (Stupid Liam.)

I definitely hope you'll write more about the Disney kids!

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empressearwig September 13 2009, 16:33:23 UTC
I just love Niley and the thought of the two of them together because when you compare their personalities it makes no sense but yet at the same time it makes perfect sense because of the fact that they're so different.

This is pretty much the reason I adore them so much. They just fit for all the reasons they shouldn't.

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empressearwig September 13 2009, 16:17:52 UTC
Thank you!!!

Yeah, they haven't been giving us much to be hopeful about lately, but they just seem like one of those couples that will always come back to each other in the end. So hopefully they get on that soon, because I hear you on the overinvested part, lol.

Thank you!!! <3

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perfectlystill September 13 2009, 02:01:56 UTC
This was fantastic, and such a wonderful ending to this fic, even if I'm sad to see that it's over.

Miley being so nervous about the performance was beyond cute. I loved that she was listening to it and humming it and making sure she could remember all the words and wanting it to be perfect for Nick. My heart!

He heads out the door, whistling That’s Amore under his breath

THIS IS WHY I LOVE JOE.

And I love how you've had Nick fear Mrs. Cyrus and now Miley kind of fears Mr. Jonas and it's just so perfect and parents. And Tish getting them so Mr. Jonas wouldn't. Because she is a cool mom who knows what is up.

The end was so perfect and sad and hopeful and gave me a plethora of awesome feelings. So many feelings I just might burst.

Miley loves Nick.

And in the end, that’s all that matters

Perfection.

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empressearwig September 13 2009, 16:30:34 UTC
I KIND OF LOVE JOE A LOT TOO, CAN YOU TELL?!?!

Hee.

Thank you so much!!! I am so glad you liked it and that it gave you feelings, because that is totally the point of all of this, right?

Thank you!!! <3<3<3

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5goodgears October 4 2009, 22:01:01 UTC
Just found this today and wanted to say that I loved it. You did a really nice job of incorporating all the things we know happened into the story and making it all feel organic. I really want this to be true (why yes, I am overly invested in two 17 year olds lives), its just that they seem so happy when they are getting along! Also, I love Joe, so appreciate his involvement whenever it pops up :) Ditto for Demi. Actually, one of my favorite things was how it wasn't just about Nick and Miley but also about their families and missing each other in more than just a romantic way. Nice job :)

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empressearwig October 4 2009, 22:30:50 UTC
Thank you so much!!! I totally feel you on being overly invested in two 17 year olds love lives. They just make it hard not to be. I'm so glad you liked it!! :)

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sin_fuego September 21 2010, 05:41:41 UTC
I never wanted this to end. I was so wrapped up in this story and how real it felt and hopeful too. I loved how you incorporated their friends, families, and news media into the narrative - it all felt so natural. Thanks for sharing :)

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empressearwig September 21 2010, 22:36:23 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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