(DWP Mirandy fic): We was meant to be...

Oct 27, 2013 12:04


… but never meant to last.

Two muffled beeps sounded through the foyer as I finished bundling up in the latest Diana von Fürstenberg trench coat before making my way out of the townhouse and towards the waiting car. Roy stood patiently next to the back door, seemingly unaffected by the harsh, autumn wind that had suddenly kicked up, sending an ( Read more... )

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ea_phoenix October 28 2013, 02:29:28 UTC
Thanks for commenting!! Always very appreciated. I knew there were bound to be a few things that could give it away, but I'm glad the misdirect held cause it wasn't easy. lol.

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beachbum3668 October 28 2013, 00:54:30 UTC
I like it. The switcheroo sucked me in completely. Well done!

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ea_phoenix October 28 2013, 02:27:20 UTC
Lol. Yay, that's what I was going for even if it might have been a little OOC. I'm a big fan of the misdirect. Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting! Always greatly appreciated.

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theruinedcastle October 28 2013, 14:54:42 UTC
Excellent! Totally had me with the twist. The ending was very sweet, too. Thanks for the read.

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ea_phoenix October 28 2013, 23:22:36 UTC
Fantastic!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for taking the time to tell me so as well :)

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awayfan October 28 2013, 20:27:12 UTC
Wow, what a great way of tricking the mind into thinking your writing about one person, when the your story is about another. Loved it.

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ea_phoenix October 28 2013, 23:24:23 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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User thundermoo referenced to your post from October 29, 2013 saying: [...] by - Miranda/Andy - We was meant to be [...]

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