[Fic] A trio of drabbles

Feb 19, 2008 10:39

Fic for tf_drabble prompts.

AN: If you can get where the titles of these come from, you get major points =3

Characters: Optimus Prime/Elita-One, Chromia/Ironhide

Title: We've Only Just
Word Count: 155
Prompt: 5. Starting out
Rating: G

We've Only Just )

transformers, chromia, elita one, optimus prime, het, ironhide, fic, gen

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__wilderness__ February 19 2008, 16:21:20 UTC
*snickers* Ah Chromia, how we love you!

Adorable little drabbles!

And the titles are all lines from a song by The Carpenters - We've Only Just Begun

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dytabytes February 19 2008, 19:04:59 UTC
Yeah, images like this are why I have so much more love for Chromia than I do for Elita. She's just ... dynamic and lively in a way that Elita really isn't. Where Elita's Cinderella, who's nice and good and works hard and eventually gets the prince's notice, Chromia's Atalanta, who doesn't really need anyone to make herself happy, but who will accept company along the way if it pleases her.

I'm glad you like the drabbles, and also impressed that you got the song X3

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corax_onyx February 19 2008, 16:54:13 UTC
Cute an interesting contrast between the two characters. And the titles are from the Carpenter's song. I always think of it as "We've Only Just Begun" but I don't know if that's the real title.

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dytabytes February 19 2008, 19:06:54 UTC
Thank you! Elita and Chromia are the two major femmes of Transformers, if you think about it. Arcee's important too, but she's seperate from them in that she's much younger, she's single, and she's more associated with the post-movie characters. I thought it'd be interesting to compare how they go about 'winning their men' so to speak.

And you've got that song title =D Woo!

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splendidshadows February 19 2008, 18:18:11 UTC
Chromia's last paragraph ... lol! XD But it's so her. Nice drabbles!

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dytabytes February 19 2008, 19:08:34 UTC
Chromia's last paragraph was, in fact, the only reason why I wrote these drabbles. Everything before it was just a lead up... although I have a firm belief that the scene in the mess hall must have happened at some point. I'd think that Chromia would hate to feel dependent or attached to anyone because of the weakness implied.

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mmouse15 February 19 2008, 20:51:03 UTC
Those are cute and wonderful. Cute for Elita/Optimus, wonderful for Chromia/Ironhide. I LIKE Chromia - she's my kind of gal! And I can so see her doing those things. Perfect, just perfect. Especially the mess hall kiss - yup, that's happened!
And you already know I knew the song. And I'm still old because I heard it on the radio when it was new. But I'm glad your parents introduced you to the good stuff...

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dytabytes February 19 2008, 22:57:49 UTC
Thank you! Elita's nice, but Chromia's my hero.

XDD My parents are the best when it comes to taste in music, I do have to say that.

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systemscrash February 19 2008, 22:10:09 UTC
Oh... Oh goodness.

I didn't think that you could make me love them any more than I already did.

I was apparently very, very wrong.

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dytabytes February 19 2008, 23:00:22 UTC
Heeeee~. I'm so glad you liked! Honestly, I just get fic bunnies who GNAW AT MY HEAD UNTIL I WRITE sometimes. It hurts lots.

I'd also like to note that the only reason why I wrote all this is because that last paragraph needed a lead up XD;

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systemscrash February 19 2008, 23:05:17 UTC
I wish that I had that problem. 8C Sadly, I'm not cool enough to have plots gnawing on my face until things happen most of the time. It's very rarely that happen's for me. And then I do my typical thing of getting WAY TOO CRITICAL and it usually ends up getting deleted.

AND YOU TRAMP.

Then again.

IT WAS STILL REALLY AWESOME.

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dytabytes February 19 2008, 23:18:33 UTC
Pssht. Generally what happens is, I'm studying. My brain goes "I dun wanna do this anymore." and then, in order to escape, it throws plots at me. So.... I write. And write. And write. And then I don't look at it at all for the next three hours.

After that, I'll either edit it into readability, or, if I don't like it, I'll go harass Streaky on AIM SOMEONE ELSE BECAUSE STREAKY'S NOT ON AIM BECAUSE SHE'S AWAY WITH HER OTHER FRIENDS... XD

*cough* But yeah, I'll go and get someone else to read it. And then they'll either go "Holy hell, what were you smoking, this is shit, here's how to fix it" or they'll go "Holy hell, why haven't you posted this yet, here's how many babies I'll give you to go do that RIGHT NOW."

The system actually works quite well =3

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