Comments | dystopialights: the era of (between) me and you

dystopialights

the era of (between) me and you

Oct 07, 2009 12:50

the era of (between) me and you
yunjae, pg
romance/angst
4,906 words

Yunho became the leader, and he had to be loyal to five, not just one; who cared if you were the oldest (the first).
( It's the little things that get you. )

p:yunjae, fic, dbsk

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dystopialights October 8 2009, 19:42:27 UTC

thank you for commenting!and adding! :D

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latenightchai October 9 2009, 16:52:08 UTC

thank you!
ia their talk definitely was awkward, but i loved the ending... thou doth protest too much, yunjae&changmin, too much XD

r_1353 October 9 2009, 05:07:51 UTC

I love this fic~

the angst and love combined and it makes a good mix~

<33

latenightchai October 9 2009, 16:52:22 UTC

thanks! ♥

yume_no_ato October 9 2009, 10:28:11 UTC

What?! You didn't tell me about this!

It's really late, so I can't read it now, but I'm looking forward to reading it tomorrow! I'll give you my comment irl when I do. It's true, slowly but surely you're being taken over by Yunjae. Haha. :)

latenightchai October 9 2009, 16:48:27 UTC

ahaha~ 'twas a secret :3
...but not really lol. i was working on it every time i'd "take a break" at all my starbucks adventures. good way to get the writing flowing again ;)

it is so true. kinda. my subconscious has done all of the work, tho, ne?

blurmeese December 29 2009, 04:45:05 UTC

what is this heavy feeling in my chest ;; reading this was...painful, I think, mainly because you actually took certain irl situations and made things plausible and my Yunjae heart, you've broken it clean in two. In the best of ways, really. I would have liked to copy/paste my fav. parts but that'll mean feeding you your own paragraphs again so what I particularly liked was (lol point form because I can)

- how you alternated between second and third person POVs, it gave the fic a more...rounded feel? Like being able to see inside Jae's head and also getting to see Yunjae as a whole.
- (the things in these) made me reread so many lines because with them there, it turns things around D: good job is good
- that one little scene of the man and woman in Paris, that kinda struck a note with me somehow
- the fanmeet scene and the couple talk, now this is where you kinda broke my OTP heart and stamped on it as well ;; I can feel the awkwardness seeping through the words and it's...so painful. Because it was kinda real ;; bawws ( ... )

dystopialights December 29 2009, 22:11:37 UTC

lol i'm sorry to break the otp heart! ...but at the same time i'm happy you like the yunjae as well ;D
jae overanalyzes too much, but there's definitely love between the lines! =)