the era of (between) me and you

[dystopialights]

the era of (between) me and you
yunjae, pg
romance/angst
4,906 words

Yunho became the leader, and he had to be loyal to five, not just one; who cared if you were the oldest (the first).

Comments

[blurmeese]

what is this heavy feeling in my chest ;; reading this was...painful, I think, mainly because you actually took certain irl situations and made things plausible and my Yunjae heart, you've broken it clean in two. In the best of ways, really. I would have liked to copy/paste my fav. parts but that'll mean feeding you your own paragraphs again so what I particularly liked was (lol point form because I can)

- how you alternated between second and third person POVs, it gave the fic a more...rounded feel? Like being able to see inside Jae's head and also getting to see Yunjae as a whole.
- (the things in these) made me reread so many lines because with them there, it turns things around D: good job is good
- that one little scene of the man and woman in Paris, that kinda struck a note with me somehow
- the fanmeet scene and the couple talk, now this is where you kinda broke my OTP heart and stamped on it as well ;; I can feel the awkwardness seeping through the words and it's...so painful. Because it was kinda real ;; bawws.
- and of course you built things up to a quiet end that just feels...idek, fitting. It's not in-your-face obvious but it just feels right y'know?

[dystopialights]

lol i'm sorry to break the otp heart! ...but at the same time i'm happy you like the yunjae as well ;D
jae overanalyzes too much, but there's definitely love between the lines! =)