the era of (between) me and you

Oct 07, 2009 12:50

the era of (between) me and you
yunjae, pg
romance/angst
4,906 words

Yunho became the leader, and he had to be loyal to five, not just one; who cared if you were the oldest (the first).
It's the little things that get you. )

p:yunjae, fic, dbsk

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wackowacko711 October 8 2009, 01:41:59 UTC
Kya!!! i'm speechless

*taking a few moments to catch my breathe*

I absolutely loved this. The angst yet the ever evident Yunjae love.

My favorite part was when they were in Paris.

" It’s only when it’s night and the cameras are (finally) turned away, and they stand in the middle of a (too-loud) busy street that Yunho turns to him, wrapping an arm around his waist so he can’t move away. He leans in close and you find yourself leaning back, not really thinking. It’s why you’re surprised when he’s whispering in your ear-

“I meant us.”

“Yunho-”

“I’d like to bring you back. It might be more than a couple of years, it might be after all this is over, but I’d like to do that for us. Like old times.”

Like what it could be." - i'm soft a romantic, like Jae and Chun <3 ( ... )

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dystopialights October 8 2009, 19:40:44 UTC
thank you! glad you liked ♥

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mearii87 October 8 2009, 02:23:18 UTC
....

so this was breathtaking.

and i wish i could write things like this.

amazing. <3

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dystopialights October 8 2009, 19:41:01 UTC
thank you! ^^

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poppy_sky October 8 2009, 03:16:43 UTC
It was beautiful ♥
I'm memming it for sure.

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dystopialights October 8 2009, 19:43:55 UTC

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kurogoma October 8 2009, 03:32:11 UTC
i don't read alot of yunjae, and prefer AU at that if i do, i feel that most of the non-AUs i did read tried too hard to justify yunjae through RL events

but i remember your name from a previous homin 2-parter and a supernatural!yoosu i read which i really liked. so i read this, and i like it. the angst at the end was especially fitting... :)

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dystopialights October 8 2009, 19:43:38 UTC
thank you! it's true, i tend to read au only as well... but this was just, well, there. lol ^^

thank you for commenting! ♥

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chloe1910 October 8 2009, 11:31:36 UTC
wow...you have taken my breathe away...kinda bittersweet..but really, really good kind ^.~

I'll definitely be watching your writing journal :)

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dystopialights October 8 2009, 19:42:39 UTC
thank you so much ♥

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