gridlock, baby
My heart's stuck in gridlock... baby, will you be my key?
/or some snappy title like that.
A Yoosu romcom (help_japan) fic for oldwillow_brook :D♥
In which Yoochun’s a corporate somebody and Junsu’s a street-dancing nobody, and they’ve got nothing in common and no reason to meet, but Yoochun’s somehow ended up stalking him anyway.
( Part o1/o2 )
/or some snappy title like that.
A Yoosu romcom (help_japan) fic for oldwillow_brook :D♥
In which Yoochun’s a corporate somebody and Junsu’s a street-dancing nobody, and they’ve got nothing in common and no reason to meet, but Yoochun’s somehow ended up stalking him anyway.
( Part o1/o2 )
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I absolutely LOVE Yoochun's character. And I love that he watches Junsu DANCE/walk. Because Yoochun is right, you might have a voice like Celine Dion but if you don't have it outward you aren't worth anything. I love that Junsu has NO idea how to dress. Or that is his style. He dresses where he's comfortable. That's his personality and it fits his change of tone when Yoochun CHALLENGES HIM.
His whole demeanor changes in a second, going from guileless, quirky kid to this sudden, fierce… presence.
And then he opens his mouth, and he fucking sings. BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL. I can just see Junsu in this outfit, standing out in the street. This expensive tinted windowed car and him just singing into the sky. Like its nothing. Like singing isn't just a "yeah sort of but..." but a "fuck yeah, my ( ... )
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I was most worried about this part because it's really, well, ALL about Yoochun. Like, you see Junsu a bunch but you do anything BUT see him LOL so it's really Yoochun that's carrying the whole peice. It's not really Yoosu at this point, it's like... creeper-centric, roflolol. Still, there's Yoochun and his Jaejoong and I'm kinda in love with them so Jaejoong was demanded MOAR TIME IN FIC KTHANKBAI and then... there he is. He will not go away anytime soon 8D
"fuck yeah, my voice opens the heavens."LOLOLOL EXACTLY. Again it's another thing where that's the only time Junsu gets to really show himself, who he is, so I'm glad you liked it! I'll admit I was worried about making it work myself LOL, getting like 5k+ into the stalking and being like fuuuuuuuu how am I going to get them together and make it even CLOSE to plausible?? But I just kinda plowed through it, so YAY♥ if you like it and thought it worked ( ... )
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but lol you're welcome :'D♥
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The next part will do much to resolve the fail and panick-y-ness... maybe, rofl :Db
And SPEAKING OF GOOD YOOSU I /finally/ got a chance to sit down and read Wanderlust - it's been my rainy-day save-for-reading for /ages/ and then I read it and asd;alsdafg. I'm going to go back and leave a real comment (one day :'D) but gah. It was so good and it makes me look forward to your new fictions even mooooore ♥
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I. Ugh, I have nothing useful to day but random cursing and exclamations of joy and happiness. THIS IS AMAZING. I didn't even realize how much I missed yoosu (GOOD YOOSU) until just now and ja;lksdfjl;
/wibbles uncontrollably
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Thank you bb! ♥ It's been ages since I've written Yoosu but I've forgotten how much fun they are. Because they're fun. And adorable. And asjla;dslkad :'D But I'm so glad you liked! I'm wrestling with Part 2 right now, hopefully it will be up soon ;)
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your characterization is very interesting, i feel like there's so much more to each character that you've only skimmed over in this part. if this was an english class, i'd pick yours to analyze :O
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But thank you so much for the comment! I'm flattered you feel that way ♥! English class would be so much more fun if Yoosu-analysis was on the syllabus, rofl
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How old is junsu?
Can't wait for the next part
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