gridlock, baby

[dystopialights]

My heart's stuck in gridlock... baby, will you be my key?
/or some snappy title like that.
A Yoosu romcom (help_japan) fic for oldwillow_brook :D♥

In which Yoochun’s a corporate somebody and Junsu’s a street-dancing nobody, and they’ve got nothing in common and no reason to meet, but Yoochun’s somehow ended up stalking him anyway.

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[dystopialights]

OMGG YAY I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOU'RE HAPPY ;A;

I was most worried about this part because it's really, well, ALL about Yoochun. Like, you see Junsu a bunch but you do anything BUT see him LOL so it's really Yoochun that's carrying the whole peice. It's not really Yoosu at this point, it's like... creeper-centric, roflolol. Still, there's Yoochun and his Jaejoong and I'm kinda in love with them so Jaejoong was demanded MOAR TIME IN FIC KTHANKBAI and then... there he is. He will not go away anytime soon 8D

"fuck yeah, my voice opens the heavens."

LOLOLOL EXACTLY. Again it's another thing where that's the only time Junsu gets to really show himself, who he is, so I'm glad you liked it! I'll admit I was worried about making it work myself LOL, getting like 5k+ into the stalking and being like fuuuuuuuu how am I going to get them together and make it even CLOSE to plausible?? But I just kinda plowed through it, so YAY♥ if you like it and thought it worked ♥

Coffee date comes next so we get to learn a lot more about Junsu and who he is, his own awkward and flail-y parts, too :D/ They're about 15 years apart, yeah, but they fit so well together. You'll see 8DDD

As for this, I was thinking of just tweaking it (just a bit) and then un-locking/crossposting the story as it is here. Or would you rather repost so you can recomment, lolol? :D♥

[oldwillow_brook]

Even though you don't really see Junsu or have an interaction because of the way you describe him, me as a reader sort of nods along and think 'yeah, i've had that happen.' OR ITS JUST ME. ;; I swear I might be the only one distracted by people as they walk in my car. I mean everyone walks so DIFFERENT! But no one ever dances like Junsu or I never stop and make conversation ... or stop everyday at the same time. 8DD

It is Plausible! It is! Especially because I think if you were to make this in Junsu's perspective I would be ubber hesitant of Yoochun but because we know Yoochun we're more or less, less creeped out by him and just slightly worried about Junsu's reaction. Because if he automatically agrees to something like that (a guy in a car telling you could make it big) then there's something wrong with Junsu. But it worked out perfectly. There's hesitation, and confusion and uncertainty until he's challenged and Junsu proves his worth.

IM SO EXCITED. I LOVE THAT YOOCHUN IS A LOVE SICK FOOL 8DDDD and he doesn't even know it. Or he totally does 8DD I can't wait till Jaejoong realizes that he's not in love with him anymore. THIS IS EXCITING!!

You can totally unlock/cross post it. I'm not sure what you meant by the second part. But I like Plan A!

[dystopialights]

IT'S TOTALLY NOT JUST YOU. I actually got the idea watching a couple of guys dancing on a street corner (dressed in clown costumes, WHY I HAVE NO CLUE ROFL) on my way to work. While listening to Katy Perry's Teenage Dream. And evidently my brain translates that into Yoosu. IDK WHY, INSPIRATION WORKS IN MYSTERIOUS WAYS :'D

AND omg, "guy in the car" lol, exactly. I /almost/ wish this was cracktastic enough that Yoochun could pull up and offer him candy LOLOLOL

Yoochun: Hey, kid. I have... a cat that just had kittens! You want to see...? :Q___
Junsu: /confused /headtilt
Yoochun: :O Is that a yes?
Junsu: ...Ok! \:D/
Yoochun: omgyay ;~;

...But I guess we'll have to do with the more plausible version, haha~

:DDD♥ HE'S BESOTTED AND IT'S ADORABLE. Now it's just a matter of making Junsu think he is, too! Jaejoong might just be of some help there. The laziest cheerleader ever *\o/* lol

Ok! I'm not sure what I meant, either, lol. But Plan A it is, and Part 2 is in the works ♥