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FIC: Turn Around, Bright Eyes

Feb 15, 2011 05:06

Title: Turn Around, Bright Eyes
Author: ldymusyc
Pairing: Bellatrix Lestrange/Draco Malfoy
Rating: R
Prompt: #95 - We shut our eyes and turn away.
Warnings: Incest, crossgen, BDSM, minor in sexual situations.
Summary: Narcissa knows what Bellatrix is doing to her son.

( Turn Around, Bright Eyes )

fic, character: narcissa malfoy, pairing: bellatrix/draco, character: bellatrix lestrange, het, character: draco malfoy, 2011

Comments 11

scarletscarlet February 15 2011, 07:51:25 UTC

Such a good choice to use Narcissa's POV - gave that reveal at the end so much more impact. Twisted and excellent!

therealsnape February 15 2011, 08:53:42 UTC

Very dysfunctional. You do a great job with Narcissa's POV and the way she patches the information together.

cinnamonselkie February 15 2011, 11:54:24 UTC

I think this definitely classifies as dysfunctional. What on earth would you do in a situation like that? Besides freaking out, of course.

scarletladyy February 16 2011, 03:21:39 UTC

So dysfunctional, and so fucking good ♥

cranky__crocus February 19 2011, 17:31:35 UTC

Narcissa rises in haste and leaves without excuse. She hurries through the corridors of the Manor, tears stinging her eyes.
Such powerful emotions expressed in just two paragraphs. I've never had much interest in Draco or Narcissa as characters, but this story has absolutely caught my interest. That is a devastating thing for a mother to find on her son!

There are bruises on his shoulders, purple, green, yellow, bruises on top of bruises in layers that tell of weeks.
Oh my. This is one of those statements that makes a reader suck in air quickly through her teeth. I can't imagine being fully in Narcissa's mind right now.

Her sister's laugh floats through the closed door and Narcissa stumbles away, wiping her eyes.The ending of this piece. My goodness. The idea of seeing this done to one's child is heart-breaking, but the idea of knowing that one's kid sister is behind it is just...something else. I can completely understand Narcissa's heartbreak as she witnesses this; I feel you have gifted a little to the reader as well, ( ... )