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Undying

I watch undying love  fade,
Fading into the sunset.
The birds fly right into it,
As if they found that love.

That love is more powerful then life,
I feel love can take or make life.
Undying love will help you,
Hurt you,
And make you do some dumb things.

Watching couples hold hands,
Walk together,
Laugh together,

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[dweebyweeby]

I wrote them when i was sad not to long ago. I write better when i'm sad