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Undying
I watch undying love fade,
Fading into the sunset.
The birds fly right into it,
As if they found that love.
That love is more powerful then life,
I feel love can take or make life.
Undying love will help you,
Hurt you,
And make you do some dumb things.
Watching couples hold hands,
Walk together,
Laugh together,
Hurts me now.
They are finding undying love,
Love in which I do not know.
My heart is racing around,
Going in circles,
Trying to hard to find,
What can't be found,
But given.
That love is given through faith,
Faith which causes all things to happen.
I feel when somethign happens,
It all happens for a reason.
The reason is unknown until,
You are old.
Old enough to realize what God gave you,
What God's plans were,
When he, so greatly put you on this Earth.
I write of undying love,
As if I know it myself.
I don't, but sometimes I think I might have.
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First Love
First love stabbed me,
And keeps doing so.
His name tortures,
His voice kills.
It is a bad song,
Which is left on repeat.
Starts off happy,
Up beat tune,
Then sudden scratch.
I scratched the cd twice.
I feel I didn't mean to,
Purhaps I was careless.
The song kept playing,
But occasionaly went over the scratch.
Scratch was long and deep,
It plays throughout the song,
Never stops,
Never will.
The song reminds me,
And I can't move on.
I want to, I want to,
But the songs keeps playing.
I now feel stronger,
But yet I hear the song.
The song on repeat,
Which will be always playing.
Playing as long as he is in my life.
I guess he isn't torturing me,
I'm torturing myself,
For i mad the scratches.
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