Black Water Hattie (12 of 15?)

May 17, 2016 17:39

Title: Black Water Hattie (Chapter 12)
Author: duwinter
Fandom: DWP
Pairings: Miranda/Andy, Emily/Serena
Rating: PG-13

Dedication: This story is dedicated to two members of our community, the Raven a.k.a. unfortunateggs who has repeatedly asked for a sequel to my story No Swimmin. (Sorry, It started out to be, but this ain't it.) and Mxrolkr, whose wonderful story Cerulean ( Read more... )

status: wip, all: fiction, pairing: miranda/andy, title: black water hattie, rating: pg-13, author: duwinter

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ext_3566028 May 18 2016, 01:19:07 UTC
i love your history

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duwinter May 18 2016, 14:35:37 UTC
I'm unsure of what you are complimenting me for, but being the sort that purrs like a contented house-cat when his ego is stroked, I thank you for the compliment! Thank you for reading and commenting.

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samspotsu May 18 2016, 08:08:58 UTC
I loved this chapter. Look forward to the rest of the story. Your updates are always a pleasant surprise.

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duwinter May 18 2016, 14:37:52 UTC
Thank you for your kind words. I think the rest of the story will satisfy my readers. I'm glad you find my infrequent updates a pleasant surprise. I hope to have more soon. Thank you for reading me and for taking the time to let me ow your thoughts.

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jrzgirl88 May 18 2016, 10:37:16 UTC
This is an amazing story...thank you for posting

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duwinter May 18 2016, 14:40:07 UTC
It pleases me that you are enjoying my tale. Thank you for taking the time to read my words and for letting me know your thoughts!

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awayfan May 18 2016, 14:16:04 UTC

Miranda will save Andy from the towns people and herself if it costs her everything. A new life with a family that loves one another. So looking forward to seeing what happens next

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duwinter May 18 2016, 14:42:52 UTC
Yes, Miranda will sacrifice everything for her family. But, like the phoenix of legend, will anything keep Miranda from rising from the ashes of her former life? Stay tuned! Thank you for reading me and for your comments. I do look forward to hearing from you when I post.

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mxrolkr May 18 2016, 22:42:20 UTC
I'm doing a Happy Dance, in my chair. I love where you've taken this! Poor indeed.
Bravo my friend!!

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duwinter May 19 2016, 00:15:17 UTC
I'm so pleased that you are doing your happy dance. I'm having a good time with this story and the response to it is just super. As always, thank you for reading me and for sharing your thoughts. Cerulean Blue maybe? Please, can?

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mxrolkr May 19 2016, 02:14:46 UTC
I have actually been working on it, a bit. I've been working on, not re-writing it so much as 'fixing' it. It was my very first attempt at fanfiction and I now see GLARING mistakes...lol
I have put some pen to paper for ideas. Getting everything to come together, well, it's been a long time since the last update for good reason. Writers block is a nasty, mean bitch. I have always, always intended to finish it, I would love to see that happen this year.
Thanks for your continued support and belief in me and the story. It truly does mean a lot!
I have loved your writing from the start and Hattie is, I think some of your BEST work! I am truly looking forward to (what I call) the "David" twist of the story. It's always the best part!

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duwinter May 19 2016, 03:11:17 UTC
I understand all too well what you're saying about writer's block. I often struggle with periods where, ideas continue to flow but I can't get anything close to what I consider an acceptable sentence down on paper. It is frustrating in the extreme. Then there are the periods where my muse will go silent. Between the two it's amazing I ever got anything finished.

I also empathize with your struggle to "fix" your first works. I, myself, have recently started going through my I'll Follow line by line with the intention of correcting everything wrong with it (including fixing the fact that I dropped a major plot point in the last installment). After the first ten or so hours going at it hammer and tongs I had the thought that it would be easier just to rewrite the damned thing. *grin*

Please know that I not only continue to support Cerulean Blue it remains one of my absolute favorite stories that I reread often. It is also one of the ones that I recommend consistently to anyone that asks about Mirandy stories that are worth reading ( ... )

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