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dusk_eyed

No Regrets - NC17

Jan 14, 2007 00:54

Title: No Regrets
Author: dusk_eyed
Pairing: Ritsuka/Soubi
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Still don't belong to me but I like to imagine their future. No harm meant.
Warnings: Cross-Dressing, References to Master/slave, Topping from the Bottom
Author's Note: The original inspiration for this was one of the prompts for 10_fashions, red satin and fishnets, but I was further ( Read more... )

10_fashions, ritsuka/soubi, loveless, fic

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tekalynn January 14 2007, 07:42:45 UTC

*sigh* Damn, this is hot!

No regrets, indeed. Yeah!

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 16:28:50 UTC

Thank YOU for helping me make it better. *hugs tight*

tekalynn January 14 2007, 21:38:48 UTC

My pleasure! (I had to do very little, really.) ; )

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 21:43:21 UTC

Yes, but what you did made me feel more confident and that's a good thing. :)

tekalynn January 14 2007, 09:35:46 UTC

Thank you homage/giftfic/Gedankenexperiment ( ... )

tekalynn January 14 2007, 09:36:49 UTC

(continued)

Ritsuka scrutinized his face in the mirror. While he'd attained pretty much his full growth at seventeen, his face had retained a chiseled delicacy of feature that was almost androgynous. The subtle face and mouth makeup enhanced that look, giving him an ethereal, faerie cast. The heavy eye makeup brought out the startling dark contrast of his irises and added a sultriness that kept him from appearing too childlike.

He took a deep breath. "I think that'll work. Thanks, Yuiko."

She nodded, suddenly serious. "I think it will. Here, let me write down the names of the cosmetics, then you can get your own."

"Okay." He took some tissues and wiped off the most obvious traces of makeup before getting up to leave."

"Ritsuka-kun?"

"Yeah?"

"Go get him."

His last sight as he turned and waved goodbye was Yuiko's happy smile.

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 16:32:51 UTC

*bounces around happily* I had the goofiest smile on my face while I was reading this. This is wonderful. So happy and light and sweet. You should post it.

This was my favorite line though:

She was the best straight girlfriend a gay boy could have.

Love it!

tekalynn January 14 2007, 21:43:49 UTC

*squee* Thank you! And thank you for giving me the idea.

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anatketani January 14 2007, 13:47:33 UTC

F....guh.
*murbles*

Okay NOW I'm awake.
Jeez, girl, you're evil.
*loves*

This line keeled me: "You don't like it?" he asked, and there was a painful sob somewhere lost beneath the words.

GAH so perfect!

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 16:33:34 UTC

I am, aren't i? *laughs* Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you liked it!

karadin January 14 2007, 16:14:34 UTC

I think you are the sadist, hot! hot! hot!

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 16:34:04 UTC

Hee. Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

priestess_grrrl January 14 2007, 18:59:38 UTC

ahskdlfhjkdsa;fhksajkshdflkaskjhdflkajhsdfkjhsadfkjhsafdasdhrkasdkfjh~!

*tacklehugs dusky* OMG!!! *is ded of teh holy hotness*

okay, I've completely lost the ability to form coherent thoughts. um. er. wgyfshfh? Was Ritsuka just wearing SILK PANTIES?? cuz... that's what I thought I just read. *brain short circuits* oh DEAR!!

So like, I'm reading this, and I get like a couple paragraphs in and I'm like... MUST HAVE CHOCOLATE RIGHT NOW!! So I run upstairs to get the chocolate icing in the can (which is the best for teh pr0n, you know) and then my MOTHER calls, and she's like, "What button do you push on your cell phone to get a dash, because I put the numbers in but I couldn't figure out how to do a dash and I read the manual but I couldn't find anything..." and I'm just like... Ritsuka. panties. fishnets. eyeliner. my mother. DAMNIT. "Ma, I'll look at it when I come up, okay? I gotta go ( ... )

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 19:03:11 UTC

*bounces with glee* I'm so glad I could get it finished before all of your birthday glow was over. *hugs you tight* I'm delighted that you like it. I was waiting to make sure before I posted it anywhere else.

Oh and make sure you read Teka's comment fic, it's adorable too.

tekalynn January 14 2007, 21:50:36 UTC

Mmmyeah, red silk panties. I'm surprised Soubi left them intact.

I spent half of the fic wondering "So, is Ritsuka tucking or not?" and then got to one paragraph and "Oh. He's not tucking. Holy HELL he's not tucking, rowrrr!"

; )

dusk_eyed January 14 2007, 23:26:57 UTC

Dude. I'm not even sure what tucking is. Is that where they like, push it down where it looks like they don't have one? That always looks like...ow. Just ow.

Plus, Ritsuka's not trying to pretend to be female - just playing with the idea of it. As Yuiko said, "Soubi-san will LOVE it" and of course, he did. *g*

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