drabbles;;

Aug 19, 2013 22:42

the fear (of falling apart);;
jongin/sehun // 683 words / r / angst
warning: grammar errors; mentions of violence and self-harm
→ another late night visit from sehun.

a/n: this is my jam.

sehun gives him a small, sad smile and jongin feels like crying too. )

!fanfic, pairing: jongin/sehun, fandom: exo

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braekfast August 19 2013, 22:02:26 UTC
I really like these!
you broke my heart with the first one and I just want to hug Sehun and punch his father in the face and idk I'm sad and Jongin is cute.

but
they stop at the side of the road later and fuck in the backseat
at first it was really dramatic bc they fucked up and have to run away and then it was kind of fluffy and then all of a sudden this happened and I don't know why but I couldn't stop laughing???
it's not even funny, I'm just stupid.

and the last one was really sweet and funny and bratty Sehun in denial is my favorite Sehun tbh but yes, he is dumb and he'd even like it when Jongin would be bald bc it's Jongin and Jongin always looks good so--

but yeah, Yunii, you did a great job with all of them and asdfghjkl what is sekai?
okay bye <3

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dumbhun August 20 2013, 11:29:16 UTC
I think I kinda broke everyone's heart with the first one, but I'm not sorry. I want to write a prequel to this, but will I ever write it?????

and don't worry, I laughed too, lol. it sounds a bit... yeah, idk.
maybe I should have written it a bit different. so it wouldn't sound that.. strange, but now it's too laaaaaaaaaate--

you know, two days ago you told me that you're not going to read SeKai bc pain and now you read it ( : <3

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xxhna August 19 2013, 23:04:18 UTC
“love me, jongin. please”

this broke my heart, omgosh

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dumbhun August 20 2013, 11:33:14 UTC
/heals your heart

thanks for reading ( :

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jumpthisship August 20 2013, 00:49:15 UTC
ughhhhhh I loved these. At first I was like maybe I shouldn't because I don't cope well with angst, but then I did anyways and I loved them all. The first was heartbreaking, but at the same time so sweet. Sehun's "Love me, jongin. please" killed me, oh my gosh. the second was bittersweet. I'm curious about the backstory >_> And the third was too adorable, and just so...sekai. Classic sekai. Love love loved it. "You like it, don't you?" Ohhhhh, Jongin. I love you too much.

Beautiful drabbles. Seriously. ♥

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dumbhun August 20 2013, 11:36:05 UTC
haha, usually I can only write BaekYeol angst, but somehow I managed to write this uhh--

the backstory of the second story isn't really there, tbh, but it's more a 'wrong time, wrong place' thing and SeKai themselves didn't do much. but everyone thinks they did--

I'm glad you liked them and thanks for commenting ( : <3

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indira22 August 20 2013, 02:10:18 UTC
ugh these OTP give me so much feel
i cant
and these drabbles even the angst one is perfect!!!
*but i love how Sehun hair thing XD*

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dumbhun August 20 2013, 11:36:43 UTC
SeKai is awesome, right~?

I'm glad you like them, thanks for reading! ( :

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orangeshark August 20 2013, 02:29:46 UTC
the first drabble really pulled out on my strings as if i can feel sehun's bruises.

second was really hot (backseat sex) without even being descriptive.

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dumbhun August 20 2013, 11:38:11 UTC
hahaha, I really wanted SeKai to have sex in the backseat in their happy moment without really writing it, lol.
I'm still too easily embarrassed to upload smut--

thank you for reading \*3*/

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orangeshark August 20 2013, 16:14:14 UTC
goshh smut taints my innocent (not so) heart hahahaha but really curious why the two's getting hunted down?

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dumbhun August 20 2013, 16:38:45 UTC
I hoped nobody would ask that???

bc I don't really know it myself, hahaha.............
I didn't think much about it, tbh, some ideas are in there, but yeah--

in my head it's something like that they didn't really do something or didn't really want to do something like they did. bc someone used them. so something happened (I tend to murder uhhhhh) and their traces are everywhere, so everyone thinks it was them, but really, they were just at the wrong time at the wrong place.

this sounds so stupid omg, I could come up with something better or a real plot if I'd think longer and harder about it mhhh.

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