HP Fic - “Unplottable”

[eltea]

Title: Unplottable
Fandom: Harry Potter
Prompt: Something quintessentially British
Wordcount: 1617
Genre: General/Adventure
Rating/Warnings: K+
Summary: The Marauders go on a search for a hidden castle.
Author’s Notes: For shimotsuki: Merry Christmas in April! :) The prompt was Harry Potter characters and something awesome I’d discovered in the U.K. that the

Comments

[tierfal]

And by "patented," you mean "cloned and distributed, so we can all be this brilliant every once in a while"? ;D

[shimotsuki]

This is marvelous! And just what I needed in the middle of a very busy week.

The dialogue really captures the way I think the Marauders must have been (and I like pre-evil Peter; he's great here as well). Thank you for telling us, hee!

And then the twist ending, which I totally did not see coming, made me snicker. James and Sirius don't think they miss a thing, but... :)

Thank you so much for writing this for me!

[koneko_zero]

This is absolutely marvellous, my dear. The idea is fantastic, and you write these lovely boys so very well! Heck, you write exceptionally well period, but the way you capture their characters and write their dialogue... I mean, "What if we meet a bear who's a serial killer?" I can absolutely imagine that coming up in conversation with these four. And the fact that Peter and Remus came with Snape and Lily! Oh, that was such a marvellous touch!

Ahem. I'll stop rambling now. Basically, I love it, it is now canon to me, and you are amazingly excellent.

♥

[tierfal]

BUGS ON A PIECE OF PAPER.

You are made of win and awesome like whoa. :D

Also, rereading, I love very much the fact that Remus totally lets them make up and try stuff that doesn't work, completely aware of what's actually effective. And kinda-BFFs!Peter and Remus are awesomesauce~