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An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 21.1 (21 of 35)

Jul 20, 2013 10:02

Title: An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 21.1 (21 of 35)
Author: dtstrainers
Paring: Donna Noble/Peter Carlisle
Co-Captain of this Ship: WhosInTheAttic- As always, eternal thanks.
Rating: PG- lots of plottiness here
Word Count: 5,424
Summary: Ian steps forward and offers Peter some unexpected help and Peter tutors Donna in the finer points of ( Read more... )

an officer and the noble woman, crossover, whosintheattic, fanfic, peter carlisle, donna noble, doctor who, blackpool

Comments 5

Extra treat crystalball25 July 21 2013, 23:23:38 UTC

Not only is this story very well written, but that extra little treat at the end? Dang! I could listen to that all day. So, thanks! I look for updates everyday, although I don't really know why. Every time I read a new chapter, I just want more! : ) This is a great story and I am really enjoying reading it. Keep up the great work!

Re: Extra treat dtstrainers July 22 2013, 02:25:34 UTC

Oh, you are too kind. I'm enjoying writing this, and I'm glad you're enjoying reading it. And the Shakespeare clip inspired this, so I only thought it fair to share. I try to post weekly, but I'm not sure if it's going to happen this week. RL is being a pain.

Thanks again for reading and for the kind comments.

dm12 July 29 2013, 19:54:21 UTC

Ian's really helping out now! And his mom loves a good romance and a mystery... UNIT's now going to catch wind of this ( ... )

tkel_paris August 7 2013, 20:08:47 UTC

I am liking Ian more and more. I think he's going to prove an invaluable ally. And good for his mum. :DDDD

Oh, I could've melted over the scene between Donna and Peter. He showed her the real beauty of the sonnets, and I think he found her wanting to learn endearing. Methinks they'll be sharing a bed a lot more often. ;D

Sorry for the lack of comments. I was in the midst of July's Camp NaNo, and then I had a birthday present for someone to finish. I'll start posting sometime after Midnight tonight, or sometime tomorrow. It's the follow-up to a story I'm finishing posting tonight. But don't read it if you're not in a good place in your writing. Tonight's completion is the second story in a series that will take me years to complete. *sighs*

Anyway, almost caught up on my commenting. :)

eloriekam August 27 2013, 00:57:01 UTC

I am spluttering and laughing at Ian's various bombshells here.

Peter finding Donna with a book reminds me about that book she found behind the cushions a chapter or two back?

Sharing a bed with someone was difficult for some people, he reckoned, especially if they were accustomed to sleeping alone, but not for him. Peter had been surprised at how easily he'd been able to fall asleep since they'd been together, even in her unfamiliar bedroom. In her arms, all the chaos and cacophony of the day fell away: in her bed, the clamor of his thoughts stilled and Peter found blessed peace.This bit made me cry a bit (probably a good thing as I've got lots of emotions pent up but there's never a really good time to ponder what-ifs and might-have-beens). I've never shared a bed that way, but sometimes wonder--as I do with almost everything else about romantic or sexual relationships--what it's like to have someone else at night and not be alone with thoughts of the day or tomorrow or whatever ( ... )