Live Free or Die Hard Fic: National Pastime (1/2)

[dsudis]

Many thanks to lamardeuse and missmollyetc for beta, and for not finding my Die Hard story about baseball patently ridiculous.

McClane/Farrell. NC-17. 13,288 words.
"Nothing like the upper deck at Shea in July," McClane said, in a hearty, two-working-legs, not-even-wearing-a-sling-anymore kind of voice that made Matt want to punch him a little bit.

Comments

[eeyore9990]

Gah, seriously, this is excellent writing. And let me tell you, I HATE stadium seating at ballparks. I always feel like I'm going to fall. Poor Matt.

[dsudis]

Thank you! One of my betas is afraid of heights, and I got a talking-to for not warning her about that part. :)

[dsudis]

Do I lie? *g*

[betzz]

My joy is indescribable!

[dsudis]

*beams*

[renenet]

OMG you're posting! YAY! And I can tell it's awesome already, even though I'm stuck at work without time enough to read it before I have to report back to, you know, WORK. But I am SUPEREXCITED!!!!!

I love them SO MUCH, Dira. And it's allyourfault.

[dsudis]

\o/

I will happily take the blame for that!

[renenet]

OH! Oh, oh, oh! Best part break EVAR!!!

[dsudis]

Yay! I debated a lot on where to put it. :)

[cathalin]

akldnaklfdsnkl!!!

I was reading this slowly on purpose, reading parts over, it was so freaking excellent, watching the bar move down the right hand side of the page, knowing I was coming to the end, wanting to make it last...

Imagine my joy when I scrolled down far enough to see there's a SECOND PART. I think I'm at least as tense as Matt at this point, and that's saying something. This is *fantastic*.:)

[dsudis]

Heee, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!