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shayheyred in ds_flashfiction

1979 - another perspective

Jul 01, 2003 16:39

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( 1979 )

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lamardeuse July 1 2003, 14:42:10 UTC

Oh baby oh baby oh baby.

Mmmm....crying!Welsh.

And when he was done, he blew his nose and went to work.

Just perfect.

shayheyred July 2 2003, 07:27:07 UTC

Thanks so much.

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shayheyred July 2 2003, 07:27:26 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it.

imkalena July 1 2003, 16:15:17 UTC

I didn't know. :-) Until . . . “It’ll be okay, Hardy, I promise,” I was totally clueless. What a wonderful, if sad, surprise!

shayheyred July 2 2003, 07:27:49 UTC

Thanks. Glad I surprised you!

akite July 1 2003, 17:07:21 UTC

Well, I don't want to have your babies, Shay. ::g:: I'll leave that to Carla, but this was magnificient. I kind of thought it was Welsh, but I wasn't really sure until the Hardy. Wonderful, sweetie.

shayheyred July 2 2003, 07:28:43 UTC

Whew. Thank God you don't want my babies, too. Thank you so much for your nice words.

bethbethbeth July 1 2003, 17:20:43 UTC

I've said it before, and I'll say it again: Shay is the coolest! *g*

Seriously, hon...this was great. I got that it was Welsh halfway through, but the transition from "it's gotta be Ray" to "it's gotta be Harding" was flawless. And? I love stories that point to shared attributes (canonical or at least *likely) between characters and say "See? See? This is the connection you saw!"

shayheyred July 2 2003, 07:30:02 UTC

Hey - who's cooler than us, sistah?
Thanks - glad you liked my Welsh backstory. He and Ray seem to have a level of understanding that's pretty deep, so I thought: Why not?