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Delayed Gratification Challenge: Anticipation (G) by Arrow

Mar 14, 2009 20:51

Title: Anticipation
Author: arrow00
Pairing: F/K (implied), Dief/?
Rating: G
Wordcount: 720
Categories: DitL (day in the life)
Warnings: none
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( Anticipation )

delayed gratification challenge

Comments 63

luzula March 15 2009, 11:52:39 UTC

Dief! He's so single-minded. And I love how you wrote his POV, especially how he's afraid that Ray will eat his kibble!

A friend of mine told me about someone he knew, who'd take kibble as emergency food on long wilderness expeditions. Apparently if he took regular food, he wouldn't have self-control enough not to eat it before there was an emergency. But kibble was just unappealing enough that he wouldn't eat it before he had to. (Ewww.)

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:55:34 UTC

omg that's so (ew) funny.

I imagine Fraser would have no problem eating kibble. I just figure he would save it for Dief in such a situation.

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arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:56:17 UTC

\o/ thanks, miss_zedem. hi to your pup!

vsee March 15 2009, 12:22:02 UTC

Awwww!!

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:56:27 UTC

love_jackianto March 15 2009, 17:48:40 UTC

That was great! Loved the Dief speak.

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:56:43 UTC

was so much fun to write. thanks, jacki.

sam80853 March 15 2009, 23:53:08 UTC

Hehe ... this is so damn adorable!

Dief tried to give him his own kibble-food, even though he was hungry, so hungry-hungry-hungry, but Fraser made eyes-sad and said, No, thank-you-kily, Dief.

Awwww, Dief!

arrow00 March 16 2009, 01:30:34 UTC

\DIEF!/ I heart him so much.

Thanks, sam!