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Delayed Gratification Challenge: Anticipation (G) by Arrow

Mar 14, 2009 20:51

Title: Anticipation
Author: arrow00
Pairing: F/K (implied), Dief/?
Rating: G
Wordcount: 720
Categories: DitL (day in the life)
Warnings: none
Now with Podfic recorded by kalakirya!

( Anticipation )

delayed gratification challenge

Comments 63

j_s_cavalcante March 15 2009, 07:22:47 UTC

HEE! So much fun! (I just stumbled over to my desk after spending many hours just mixing paint. The prep work for this project is ten times longer than the actual painting, unfortunately.) This was such a welcome delight! Like a donut to Dief. :)

This line in particular made me laugh very hard:
Dief eats immediately, because food, and because though Ray doesn't seem to like kibble-food, Dief is always worried he will change his mind.

But the whole thing is hilarious and adorable. And very Dief! I love the lines he sort-of-hears. I figured most of them out, but not all of them, and wow, that was tough! (I know, you probably didn't want us to do that, but I'm stupid with fatigue at the moment.)

And I love his interpretations of Fraser's behavior, especially that last bit, licking Ray's fingers.

This was so much fun, and the best thing is, Arrow!fic, two days in a row! We win! \o/

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:52:42 UTC

girls were up too late!

so glad you enjoyed the silliness. it was the very first thing that popped into my mind thinking of "delayed gratification" other than, you know, Fraser tying Ray up and teasing the hell out of him (a delicious idea, but not really original. :)

podfic_lover March 15 2009, 09:07:13 UTC

Hee, selective hearing! Very important when living with Fraser. ;)

This is so Dief, with his food fixation, overflowing enthusiasm and blatant ploys. Thanks for sharing!

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:53:23 UTC

thanks so much. your icon is PERFECT. :)

grey853 March 15 2009, 09:14:07 UTC

OMG, that is sooooo funny. I love how you've captured Dief's wolfie thoughts. Well done.

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:53:36 UTC

hee! thank you.

wihluta March 15 2009, 09:21:14 UTC

AW! I have the widest grin on my face now. This is awesome. :-)

There's nothing under-table but dust and a (too-old) piece of carrot.
So, I take it they're in Ray's apartment? *gg*

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:54:02 UTC

heck yeah. I imagine the carrot was for Turtle. :)

thanks, wihluta!

etcetera_cat March 15 2009, 11:29:08 UTC

This wins at really an awful lot of things! ♥

arrow00 March 15 2009, 18:54:17 UTC

yay! *twirls you*