Self-Insertion Challenge by Berty

[bertybertle]

Title: Trust Issues
Author: Berty
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: G
Word count: 813
Summary: A stakeout with a difference.
Notes: Thanks to the eternally gorgeous secretlybronte for a snappy but thorough beta. Any remaining errors are mine.

Comments

[akite]

“I know where she lives, Fraser. What do you say we…?”

“Ray!”

And she was still there when they doubled back five minutes later.

*snort* No, really, I honestly snorted. Poor guys. *g*

[bertybertle]

A snort! My work here is done! *grins* Thanks for reading.

[dessert_first]

Heeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Too cute. Well played, Ms. Bertle!

[bertybertle]

*grins* Thank you! secretlybronte insists that I made myself sound old - and she wants a series of children's books about the magical kindergarten teacher, Ms. Bertle. *sigh* If she only knew.... ;-)

[danian]

This is absolutely great! Poor Dief :)

[bertybertle]

Dief suffers! But Beth keeps him in snacks, so it evens out in the end. Thanks for reading.

[hurry_sundown]

Berty, omg, this is wonderful - and not the least because you've perfectly captured "first day away" anxiety.

<3<3<3<3<3

[bertybertle]

Yeah! Being on the other end of that puts a whole different perspective on "first day" anxiety! :-)

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[sisterofdream]

Yay! I love this idea. Terribly cute and exactly what they would do.

[bertybertle]

Hee! Thank you so much.