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Five challenge by china shop

Aug 15, 2007 17:20

With many beta thanks to aerye for being tough and mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No

five challenge

Comments 88

hieronymousmosh August 15 2007, 06:03:27 UTC

Oh dear, I seem to be making a high pitched noise . . . This was the perfect way to end my day *g*

china_shop August 15 2007, 06:22:58 UTC

Yay, thank you! *beam*

slidellra August 15 2007, 06:07:24 UTC

Oh, I love this! I love how the pieces sketch in a larger world we can imagine for them, and their relationship (camaraderie? ease-with-tension?) is deeply satisfying. Yay!

glancing at Fraser as his did so

china_shop August 15 2007, 06:23:53 UTC

Oh, yay! Thank you! :-D

(And fixed. Thanks. *rueful* I may've gotten into poor posting habits.)

lamentables August 15 2007, 07:12:17 UTC

*sigh*

Lovely. I like the build-up/momentum as the parts get bigger.
(Hee, I mentioned parts getting bigger :)

china_shop August 18 2007, 03:57:45 UTC

(Hee!)

Thanks! :-D

woolly_socks August 15 2007, 08:06:00 UTC

*snuggles into this story and settles in for the night*

china_shop August 18 2007, 03:58:08 UTC

Awww, yay! Thanks! :-)

woolly_socks August 18 2007, 05:00:47 UTC

Forgot to say - I don't know if I was just in a silly mood when I read this, but when I saw 'PG-rated', my brain translated it as 'Paul Gross rated'. Does that ever happen to you?

china_shop August 18 2007, 05:07:04 UTC

All. The. Time. *g*

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chalcopyrite August 15 2007, 08:35:09 UTC

::happy sigh:: My morning just got more cheerful, thank you.

china_shop August 18 2007, 03:58:29 UTC

Yay! Thanks. :-D