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Five challenge by china shop

Aug 15, 2007 17:20

With many beta thanks to aerye for being tough and mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No

five challenge

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china_shop August 18 2007, 03:58:50 UTC

Thank you! *beam*

streetspirit18 August 15 2007, 09:24:54 UTC

Oh, yeah. *big stupid grin*

♥

china_shop August 18 2007, 05:12:35 UTC

*beam* Thanks!

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china_shop August 18 2007, 05:12:55 UTC

Thanks, you! *beam*

buzzylittleb August 15 2007, 09:54:38 UTC

This is awesome and really cleverly constructed. The first few sound like random events, but when you get to the last one, you know they're not. *hugs the boys*

china_shop August 18 2007, 05:13:37 UTC

Aw, yay! Thank you! :-D

vsee August 15 2007, 10:20:57 UTC

I love this so much. This just works as a five things story so well, too, which makes it even more satisfying. I love the whole five things subgenre, and I love it when the story really FITS, and it isn't just a conceit.

Great buildup, delightful resolution. *loves more*

china_shop August 18 2007, 05:13:56 UTC

Thank you so much! *beam*