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Badfic Challenge by shoemaster

Apr 18, 2006 00:20

Title: There's a Moon Out Tonight
Author: shoemaster
Rating PG-13 (Ray has a potty mouth!)
Word Count: 2046
Summary Fraser's hid his true nature from everyone in America for years. RayV was starting to figure it out but the call from the Feds derailed his probing questions. Whew! But RayK is so much more persistent... and there's something about him that ( Read more... )

badfic challenge

Comments 15

eskarinasmith April 18 2006, 07:14:22 UTC

Aaaargh! the worst type of bad!fic. A WIP that doesn't get finished!
One of my pet hates.
Seriously. My new word of the day: deawkwardifying

shoemaster April 18 2006, 16:44:00 UTC

I was really trying to finish it but then I ran out of time and but fortunately had an epiphany as to how to deal with it :D Thank you!

ulthyrja April 18 2006, 09:50:40 UTC

You know, the plot almost made sense. I was all hooked up, when you pulled the ultimate badfic sign, WIP. I am devastated!

shoemaster April 18 2006, 16:45:22 UTC

Ok, the fact that I almost made sense with a plot about werePineMartens and Weremongooses is a high compliment, thank you kindly :D

china_shop April 18 2006, 12:20:07 UTC

Mr. Mistagi???? Would be very disappointed if I cancelled.

*loves* (Also the switch from third to first person: perfect!)

Fraser had plans, and what would it look like, him showing up at Fraser’s like this? Not as sexual as he had fantasized about every night before going to bed, seeing as he currently had four legs and a tail, and Ray didn’t think Fraser would be into that.

Ye gods, this is-- this-- is AWESOME?! My brane hurts! I am ded! *hearts*

shoemaster April 18 2006, 16:48:58 UTC

Thank you! I think my favorite part about the badfic was removing the brain/fingers filter and just letting whatever wanted to come out, come out. :D

indywind April 18 2006, 16:35:25 UTC

This is totally re-enawkwardating. Just saying. :-D

shoemaster April 18 2006, 16:50:14 UTC

Heee, yeah, making up words is a hobby of mine, I love being able to throw them around. Thanks!

mousewrites April 18 2006, 17:45:38 UTC

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo!!!

hee hee! this was great and wonderful and perfect. Poor little mongoose!ray!

You did splendid with that prompt!

I, on the other hand, didn't make the deadline. I'm a bad, bad author.

shoemaster April 18 2006, 18:29:55 UTC

Heeeeeeeeeee! Thank you! I'm glad it meets your approval :D Mongooseray will get his mongoose lay eventually.

they haven't closed officially, have they? Just do what I did, make it the unending WIP!